Leon Fleming

@dakota  That’s a lovely poem!  I love fall.  Yes, I would definitely say that counts.  🙂

@w-o-holmes    I’ve got one that (I hope) evokes feelings, but it’s not about tangible objects, it’s more of a mood.   And it’s also extremely unconventional, so…

@w-o-holmes Great idea! I’ll see if I can come up with anything new but do you think that this poem counts? https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/fall-poem/

@w-o-holmes @wordsmith @evelyn

Here’s another poem I wrote a long time ago… This one was actually last December when I was awake late one night and pretty much emotionally exhausted so… It’s a little depressing.

But go ahead and give critique (which I don’t know how to do with poetry) if you’d like!!

When It Hurts to Cry

I lay there quiet,…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes

Well… At this point I can’t commit to anything… College… However, I would love to see more of your poetry and in return when I have something I deem worth embarrassing myself over I will post it. I tend to write on really simple things anyway… Either that or when I feel poetic and emotional trying to help myself sort through…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes

Wow… That was really, really cool!!! I really enjoyed it. Very mysterious, and the meaning is super sweet.

@bama-rose @cassandraia @w-o-holmes @germaine-han, thank you guys so, so much for taking the time to read my story and giving it your critique and input! I’ve been really busy lately, so I haven’t been able to do much work on it, but I’m going to try get back to it soon and I just wanted to say thank you!! All your thought and comments were…[Read more]

Hi, @w-o-holmes! I don’t believe we’ve met? I love this idea!!!! That’s honestly my favourite kind of poetry! Why else should poetry be read unless to evoke feelings? Well, anyway, I’ll try to work on something. I’m always busy but we’ll see what I come up with… 😀 *takes a deep breath and realizes she must seem really weird* Well… um… Nice…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes

Cool.

@bama-rose

Yes, I have been welcomed into the Saxon Scribes. If by hangouts group you mean something outside of story embers, then no, I am not.

@eden-anderson

Hi. Yes, I am new. You’re right, it was probably an accident.

@w-o-holmes

Okay, I get that.

@w-o-holmes XDXD

@w-o-holmes

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Congrats to everyone!

@w-o-holmes I’m not surprised you won lol 😆 Great job!

@w-o-holmes

I just came back and saw your reply. I do have a lot of this stuff down.

About the geography, I do have a map. I don’t have the Boreus people, but they’re got pretty much everything that’s north of the map. The Dlinaat have the empty space in the east. (Which wouldn’t really be empty, but my Verlisi cartographer hasn’t explored…[Read more]

@w-o-holmes Wow, neat.

@w-o-holmes

It took a litlle bit to get it, but it’s amazing! I like the “shade vs light” theme. It’s like a writer’s vow.

Very well done.

Yes! *squeals like a four year old and spins around*

@kari-karast Thanks, good job to you too.

@w-o-holmes Wow. I only managed a little over 4,000, which was great. But. Just. How?

@daeus-lamb Did you mean to leave me out of those you tagged?

@w-o-holmes

I like your written accent. Do you actually talk like that?

@w-o-holmes *whistles impressedly* Wow. That’s a lot! *insert Darth Vader ‘Most Impressive’ scene here*

@tashah-claymore I plan to. Gotta see what all the fuss with Spiderman and Bucky and Loki is about, don’t I?

@w-o-holmes I will once I find the Netflix movie we currently have so we can send it back and start getting Marvel ones.

@w-o-holmes I, personally, don’t really care.