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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
OOOooooooo ok so I really love this?? That was really good!! 😀 😀
As far as suggestions go, I agree with what Claire already said about the different questions you could ask yourself. And reading through it again, Judy hit me as someone who could be pivotal, if you wanted her to be. She seems like she could know things. 🙂
Great job!! 😀
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.
This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!
The Surrendering
I’m down to my last…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!
Awaken the Dawn
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
That sounds pretty cool! I’ll have to add it to my reading list! *ignores fact that said list is already too long*
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
@vic Don’t worry about it! Good luck with your class!
I haven’t heard if Hurt Go Happy or Counted Worthy but they sound pretty cool! I’ve heard of the Scarlet Pimpernel series, but not what it’s about. Chronicles of Narnia and Sherlock Holmes are pretty epic, tho! And so is LotR! I’ve only managed to get through it once, tho. XP The books are a…[Read more]
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Andrew Schmidt replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
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Chelsea R.H. replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
Hello and welcome to SE! It’s always great to have a new member.
It’s pretty awesome that you’re working on a Master’s. I imagine that’s a lot of work!
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is not my usual style of poetry, but the inspiration hit so hard . . . I had to write it. Critique it heartless…[Read more]
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
Welcome to Story Embers @vic !!
Your WIP sounds awesome! My sisters play violin, too! (I play piano and guitar. XP) If you have any questions about the site, I’d be happy to help! What’re some of your favorite books?
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
Your WIP sounds cool!
You play violin?!! That is awesome!!! I’ve always wanted to learn to play!
What’s your favorite fictional book?
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
Aw cool…I play piano too 🙂
Well, I love playing with my siblings (I have seven xD), looking at other books, and singing with my sisters.
How about you?
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WolverineRM replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
@vic Hey! I’m new too. Yay for imaginary worlds! XD I love it that you are so serious about getting into writing.
Middle schoolers are the best, and I know I would’ve been so encouraged by that kind of story at that age.
I used to REFUSE to share my writing so let me tell you, it’s scary but oh so worth it.
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
Welcome to Story Embers 🙂
I love the sound of your WIP.
That’s so cool that you play the violin. I had some violin lessons when I was younger but was never good at it xD
Do you play any other instruments?
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Dakota replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
@vic Welcome to Story Embers!
Violin is so beautiful! That’s so cool you can play and teach it.
I like to write poetry too! 🙂 and your book sounds interesting.
BTW, I like your forum tag! 🙂
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Joshua Sword replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
@vic Welcome to the forum from its other newest member 🙂
I’m so glad you want to write middle-grade fiction—that’s one of the most underdeveloped genres in Christian fiction. Have you written any other stories before, or will this be your first?
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Caseybold replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 3 months ago
Hi @vic! You play and teach violin? That’s so amazing! Violin is one of the most beautiful-sounding instruments 😀
It’s really impressive that you only decided to pursue writing a book a few weeks ago and you’re trying to become part of a community already. It took me way longer than that to figure out what was what and join some groups. I hope…[Read more]










