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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Bad idea? Bad idea? BAD IDEA?!? That’s an amazing idea! Let’s do it! Maybe Virtus can be waiting on a level or something. 🙂
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Ok, your villain sounds AMAZING!!!! I’d love to hear about it, especially since I have a hard time with that sort of stuff and I love villains (well, certain villains).
Thanks for the advice! I took it and got some great answers! If you want to read more about Hakan, (my main villain), you can check out the topic, since I r…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
“Respectfully, sir, you are a ignominious liar.”
Vulferym turned his gaze to the youth who now addressed him. There was barely-hidden fear in his eyes, yet also a quiet determination of some sort. They stared at each other, both thinking hard.
“Your conscience knows what you did the in the dark.” the youth said, voice dropping in volume. He turn…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
haha, thanks. I suppose that’s part of my “job,” being a writer and all.
Well, now you know you’re doing something right, lol
OH OHH!!! That’s so cool! *glances at Wylo, new respect for him welling up inside*
Ha ha! Thank you! I like coming up with quotes for each of my characters; something that defines what they believe…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
“What do you call yourself?” Nithel asked.
“…nobody really.”
The youth said, and Nithel’s chest ached for him. For the stranger believed it to be true. But before Nithel could speak, the man continued.
“When I wake up from this I’ll learn my fever broke just in time for a ghoul or some other monstrosity from the Sioan Forest to devour me.” T…[Read more]
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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Thank you! I’m glad you liked my character rant, lol. And villains’ character arcs are some of the most interesting!
Ha ha, don’t worry about it! All the characters get confusing for everyone at some point, XD
Btw, I love Rosario’s little light thing! Ehud is only an idiot in some areas, ha ha. He’s actually very…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I have a question about sir Alessio!!
How old is he?
And one more…
How old does he look? 😁
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
“You’re…Nithel?” The shadow became the smallest bit more visible, and Nithel’s chin lifted. His eyes were sad, and confused.
“Where are you from?”
Nithel made himself breathe. His shoulders and chest didn’t move with the breath, but he got air none the less. His shoulders straightened some, “I am Nithel, son of Father.”
Inside Nithel smil…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
No problem!
Hmm… I’m kinda leaning towards Vulferym, to be honest. Especially since he’s my main villain, and I feel like I need to have him fleshed out more than a side character. But at the same time, I wanna do Marek… I’m so indecisive aaaa XD
@joelle-stone Sounds good to me!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Ah, that’s actually what I was thinking! 🙂
@everyone,
Okay, I think I’m going to go with Virtus, but once I have a feel for him I’ll probably switch him out for Asor. Does that sound okay?
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Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
You asked Rose why Darth Vader was one of her most favorite Star Wars characters, but it was actually me who said it, ha ha ;). I think you just got confused what with all the block-quoting, XD Anyhow…. you gave me permission to get started (THANK YOU!!), so here goes nothing (if you drop down dead, I told you so :P):
1.…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Ooh, excellent points! I actually haven’t really thought about it a lot, but one of my siblings pointed out that he/she found a book online that had almost the exact same stuff for the villain. So now we’re coming up with family members (so the genetic powers of Leaping (world travel, as you already know), Reading (reading…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Jaylin turned around, Nithel following his gaze.
A man was rising, tears on his cheeks. Nithel’s chest twisted at the man’s pain. It took much to make man cry. At least, it had been that way with Gabrel, and every other I’ve met so far.
He went to ‘mirror’, and began speaking to it. Nithel cocked his head, glancing back to the mirror beside him.…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Ooh, all of those sound interesting. I especially like the last two, Marek and Dana, though. Hm… if I absolutely had to choose one, I’d probably do Marek. But only under threat of torture. 🙂
OY! It’s so hard to choose!!! I mean, Asor is really funny to write when he’s a side character, but I don’t want to get super super…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
If I may suggest something?
Try copy/pasting the story or whatever into a Google doc, and then send us the invite link here. I hate trying to mess with PDFs. Google docs is what I use for everything, except for the word docs I have on my thumb drive.
Aaaaand I’m rambling. But yeah, maybe try a Google doc 🙂
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
@joelle-stone No no, I don’t mind at all!! I love it in fact.
Also I meant to ask, does Lytt have any white feathers?? I feel like at one point you said her wings were brown.
And you’re so welcome! I enjoyed it 😀 *bows back*
Ooh, and lemme go back and read what you posted about them real quick. (You did post something, didn’t you?…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Nuts, it didn’t work! I got a “you can’t access this file”/”this file doesn’t exist” message. 🙁 Welp, I’m stumped. Any ideas?
And MERRY CHRISTMAS YOU PEOPLES! 🙂
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
@joelle-stone
Ok, testing 123. Here’s hoping this link file:///G:/Burn.pdf works else I should apologize to tech-savvy wet fishsticks across the world 😛
Also MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!! Hugs and kisses for everyone except unfortunately we’re still social-distancing (does anybody have like an emoji hug or something I can use? Som…[Read more] -
Joelle Stone started the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
Hi all! I might have yet another question. Ahem. 🙂
So I recently did a webinar with the amazing Brett Harris on a good publishing path, and one thing he mentioned was having multiple stories to show an agent or whatever when you’re trying to get published. I realized I really only had one, possibly two ideas, so I started coming up with…[Read more]
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