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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
She knows… the words whispered through his brain like toule curtains on a night breeze.
Malvat felt his friendliness begin to dissipate, but he kept his smile on his face and his wing lowered. “Even if I could reduce my size, lady (*cough cough* he doesn’t say this mockingly like it’s normally used today. Think about how Aragorn addresses…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
WHOOPS dropped your braincell!!! 😀
Lol like “in light of *existing* I…should probably blow something up…”
*decides to look like an innocent angel (because of course I totally am)*
Lol yes, she’s my big sister <3.
Lol, yea. I can’t decide between Meira and Connel cos Meira’s a (really cuuute) fairly important character who does need…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
You can post at any time after someone else has posted!
(And you can post again, when someone else hasn’t gone, if several days have passed.)
Does that make sense?
Go ahead! 😊
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic Introduce Your Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@skylarynn Those religions sound fascinating.🤩 I am so bad at coming up with different belief systems for fantasy…mostly because I’ve never tried, and because I struggle with relating to characters who have Christ-less worldviews. It feels so empty.
@wingiby-iggiby Goodness gravy! I wouldn’t say that was cliché at all, it actually sounds…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Will do! 😀
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Brendin is only in his thirties, I’m pretty sure 500-700 tops that…
Oh, whoops! I debated over that for a while, then decided that I was too lazy to check and trusted my memory. My bad memory. XD
(And yes, 500-700 tops 30s, ha ha ha. :P)
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Edmund Lloyd Fletcher replied to the topic How to Sin and Get Away With It in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 5 years, 3 months ago
That’s a good one @skylarynn . In fact, I just read this morning about Gideon in the book of Judges. After capturing the enemy king he’s trying to order this noobie soldier to execute the guy because he doesn’t want to. In this case the other guy is too scared and he has to do it himself.
Seems like the same kind of idea though – having ot…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Haltingly the maiden came out of the passage and met Malvat’s eyes. “My dear Malvat,” she said, her voice soft but strong enough to reach all ears. “Do you not yet know it is rude to call humans ‘mankind’? It will not do.”
She doesn’t wish to make me angry, Malvat thought, studying her. Yet she wants to make it clear that she is able to take car…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Does Malvat still understand? I don’t know…
Nope. He’ll be really confused and kinda mad and kinda impressed. 🙂 He speaks all the languages of his world, but since he’s not in his world, he won’t understand that one.
(And Nithel was a star once? SO COOL!)
My hope is that Jericho has sufficiently distracted Malvat tha…
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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic Introduce Your Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@skylarynn Wow. That world-building…🤩 I love it.
How do you work out having all those different religions? I haven’t really messed around with other religions too much. I think at this point I really have something like Old Testament Judaism and then Atheism, but yours sound really cool.
Hey there! Nice to see you again.
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Erynne replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Ok cool! I’ll try to get that going today but I don’t know if I will or not… I’m actually kind of busy today. That’s a very rare occasion XD
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Erynne replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Dominic is my only well constructed villain, so should I just continue with him or could I invent a character?
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
“Get. Out. Of my head.”
Nithel slowly side walked toward Alessio, still in a crouch. Closer, but not too close, giving Brendin and the youth space. Yes, the dragon could kill them all easier this way, but… Nithel’s brows somehow lowered more. You have a use for us. A revulsion and sickness grabbed his chest. Noy. His mind raced a bit more on…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
odd, both old and young
That is an excellent description. OH! Cool that she’s that old! ☺
Nithel’s 7,000 years. give or give a decade. *coughs: hewasastar* But, he’s only been among men about four years. -
Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Ah, okay, cool! Thx! Should I rewrite so that Malvat doesn’t know Jericho is there?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
I cannot answer you.
The thought came from the older Bearer. Odd.
Memories sashayed through the mankind’s mind, ones of villages burning, of people screaming – Malvat was taken aback. Had someone else used this Bearer for ill?
I was made into a warrior, a murderer. But I was someone else before. And now I do not know who I…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Malvat looked back to the mankind as the sudden protective urge swept over him like an eruption. Were they brothers? No… friends. New friends. Odd that they’d developed such a bond.
I have nothing to hide from you. I am afraid. That’s what he had said. Was he lying? While Malvat considered lies extremely useful at times, most of the time they…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
What are you?
“A dragon,” the creature spoke.
Nithel’s brows lowered, and his face lost the fear and became serious. It speaks. The word ‘dragon’ had as much meaning to Nithel as the word ‘mirror’ had. But…
He bit his lip, Dragon. That is what we were running from. Could it-… Nithel cleared his throat, mind steady even as his chest tre…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Ok cool! I like that drawing!
@hannahrenner@this-is-not-an-alien
Are you two related? 😂
Also, @hannahrenner, I like that Deadly Labyrinth idea. The only problem is, none of my villains are very well constructed because most of them are only in my story for a couple chapters then you barely hear of them again. Because of that, I…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Introduce Your Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Cool pics and great plot idea (yaaaasss, Brendin)!
@zee,
*annoyed sigh* RIGHT?! It’s so hard to find people like that online. Which is why I like silhouettes. 🙂 And she agreed to be my illustrator, but she’s getting so bogged down and stuff I’m thinking of telling her she doesn’t have to illustrate for me. She’s the kind of person…[Read more]
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