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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
Hi all!!
I’m not sure if you’ve seen this…
BUT WE WERE GIVEN AN HONORABLE MENTION IN THIS WAR!!!
See https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cELNYNDhdM5o1DcXvFwxkTE29p7MnZtcRzRobNuExzY/edit#
I found that Daeus’s feedback was super helpful – so please read it! š
Anyway, thanks especially to ESJohnson (for doing most of the writing) and Darth…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Interested in a dystopian/utopian fairytale sort of thing with some symbolism? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom Thanks for your help! I updated your doc with the last three chapters.
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Holiday Announcement in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 10 months ago
We have been going for twenty-eight weeks now. Can I just say, that isĀ insane.Ā I honestly wasn’t expecting the guilds to take off like they did, but now, I’m definitely sold to it.
But anyways. I just wanted to tell you that there will beĀ no more lessons from me until 2019. (I know. Huge break.) We’ll be looking at characters, and I think th…[Read more]
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ESJohnson replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Also, I’m thinking what if Aleksander’s Son attacks before he has a chance to march out? That means the spirits lied and he now has to make a choice for or against them. Any thoughts?
(And @coggleton , I was going for that David/Absalom vibe…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
So I’ve been working on a story recently, and I was wondering what you guys think of this part…
Cornelius had been walking for a while now and thirst threatened to get the best of him. He stooped beside the stream and cupped some water into his hands to drink.
Dang. This water tastes weird. Not bad, but weird.
Smacking his lips, he started…[Read more]
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Ooh, intriguing! š
Does it seem more female or male? Hmm… It feels like it could go either way… it doesn’t feel like one or the other yet, reading through.
Once you pick one gender though, you probably will want to add a quick description in this clip to signify that. -
Oh ho, this seems good *rubs hands together in anticipation*
My mind automatically thought the sprite was male. I could visualize it being all dramatic: ‘Who DARES to summon /The Great Water Sprite/!?’ etc., etc.
And I agree with @evelyn. Once you decide, some description would be helpful š -
I don’t think it necessarily seems more male or female. Make it a dude though, I feel like all the sprites I read of in stories are girls =P
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@evelyn True.
@obrian-of-the-surface-world Maybe I should paste in the rest of the story. (Below) Me and my friends took turns adding a sentence or two to the starting sentence to write the first couple pages, down to where he knocks himself out, and then I write the rest. It’s kinda a mess right now, and I’m still working on editing it, but maybe…[Read more]-
I’m sorry, lol. I didn’t realize I made so many typing errors!
” he knocks himself out, and then I WROTE the rest.”
“The wad OF money appeared in…”
I think that’s all the ones, lol. I’m not usually this messy!
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Wow. That is hard to determine where any cues might come from because it shifts too many story threads into random directions. Not sure still if I can get a gender decision on the brief part where the Water Sprite shows up. Do you have a backstory in mind for the Water Sprite? That might give you a better idea of which traits might lend…[Read more]
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@anne_the_noob14 No problem! š
By the way, next time it might be easier to start a thread in the Parimi Alca writing discussion section… it’s easier to read and respond to long messages that way. š-
@evelyn Ah, you’re right! Lol I didn’t think of that soon enough š
@obrian-of-the-surface-world Right. I haven’t yet thought up a backstory for the Sprite yet. And yes! It does help š Thanks!
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@anne_the_noob14 I think that this seemed more like a girl. If you want it to be more masculine, though, maybe mention a deep/male voice or something? (I’m sorry it’s taken me forever to see this š I got super behind on emails!)
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*thumbs up* It’s ok, lol. Holidays are always busy for everybody š
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Completely Random Thread That Is To Continue The Any Guys Out There Thread… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom @i-david @emgc @selah-chelyah Thanks so much for sharing! It was fun to read!
@theinconceivabel1 *waves*Ā Have fun watching and join in whenever!
I don’t have time right now to tell about my WIP and first story and stuff, but I can make up a writing prompt:
There is nothing quite like and unfamilliar place in the dark.Ā E…[Read more]
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Introverted Elf replied to the topic Where would you like to go in the world? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@sarah-inkdragonĀ @pursuewisdomĀ @turtleshavetoesĀ @eden-andersonĀ @millennium-m
YES, Scotland!! XDĀ Seems pretty popular for most of you.Ā Oh, and, yes, how could I forget New Zealand?!! Middle-earth, yes please! šĀ And it would also be nice to go to the Caribbean too, I think.
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Jenwriter17 replied to the topic Calling all SCI-FI WRITERS! Idea propositions! in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom Thank you for the links! I’m new to the sci-fi genre. I’m actually currently writing my first futuristic/sci-fi. š
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Evelyn replied to the topic Completely Random Thread That Is To Continue The Any Guys Out There Thread… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@emgc Congratulations on completing your first draft! That’s awesome! š
Don’t worry. I am absolutely TERRIBLE at coming up with titles. š Join the club! š
Yay! Another person who has been writing for a long time. Don’t you just love reading your terrible, awful, old stories and laughing at them? xD
I love the idea of a noble…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Just dropping in to say, welcome to our new Parimi!
Everyone make sure we give a stellar welcome to our newest…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Completely Random Thread That Is To Continue The Any Guys Out There Thread… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom Sorry it was confusing!!
*hopes you didn’t read the entirety of the other thread… the 70+ pages* š xD
Anyways welcome to the crazies! š š
No war between guys and girls. Ā @theinconceivable1 over there thought he could ban… *looks around leans in*Ā *whispers* ā¦.glitter… *grimaces* Don’t say loud over here… they don’t tak…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Interested in a dystopian/utopian fairytale sort of thing with some symbolism? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@evelyn Awesome. I’ve put together a google doc you can use.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19NtU9qPIUilV63P5itmYucybL8_6t-Ydw3Mk_p9JPDg/edit?usp=sharing
@pursuewisdom @turtleshavetoes I’m overwhelmed by the enthusiasm! That would be great.
Pursue Wisdom, here’s a doc you can…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom Haha! Thanks. š
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Evelyn replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom Ah thank you for pointing that out! I totally missed it. š
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PursueWisdom replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Hi all! I just wanted to take a second here to remind all of us Parimians to review/comment/edit/whatnot on our guild’s draft that the very talented ESJohnson and Darth Pen worked on. š I see a few of us have already commented which is wonderful; if you haven’t, please look it over so we can make it the BEST!! š (In other words, we need you.…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
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Evelyn replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom Well, it’s been over a week. Time does fly and life has been busy. š
I have not written a poem about Christmas, but I did write one about winter and snow. How did you poetry writing go?
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Princess Foo replied to the topic Infinity War [SPOILER PRONE] in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@pursuewisdom I’m glad I could help! I also forgot to put Thor: Ragnarok on that list, but the first scene of Infinity War is about the ending of Thor Ragnarok, so it is kinda important to watch too.
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ESJohnson replied to the topic Guild War…6? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@evelyn @pursuewisdom thanks, guys!
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Heather replied to the topic The Fantasy Writer's Realm in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
*inserts self into the chaos*
Aloha, friends. I come with glad tidings. I am a Fantasy writer as well! (:
I wish I had time to really read over y’all’s (y’alls? y’alls’? idk, gosh darned country slang *throws a chair*) all of you fellow human beings’ replies, but since I don’t, I suppose I’ll just jump into the fray here P:
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