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Interested in a dystopian/utopian fairytale sort of thing with some symbolism?

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  • #48317
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    Hey guys,

    I happen to have written a novella recently which I’m rather fond of. The style is a bit tricky dealing with but the plot, theme, characters, and scene structure feel solid to me.

    If anyone has a few hours and a dystopian/utopian fairytale symbolic sort of thing sounds up your ally, I could definitelyΒ use a little help polishing it up.


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    #48324
    Buddy J.
    @wordsmith

    @daeus-lamb

    He tagged me… Cool!

    I’d love to read it for you and give feedback!

    Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!

    #48327
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @daeus-lamb Hey that sounds really interesting!

    #48329
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    Great! I guess I should have mentioned that I still need about a week to prepare it for beta readers, but it shouldn’t be a long wait. πŸ™‚

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    #48330
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    By the way, if anyone’s interested, the symbolism arose when I found myself turning this story into a “response” if you will to the storyΒ The Grand Inquisitor within Fyodor Dostoevsky’s novelΒ The Brothers Karamazov.

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    #48333
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @daeus-lamb Oh! Wow! That’s really intriguing!

    #48335
    Buddy J.
    @wordsmith

    @daeus-lamb

    I am reading that book right now… Not very far in, but reading it all the same.

    Published author, reader of many books, Student in writing, and Lumenite!

    #48344
    Taylor Clogston
    @taylorclogston

    I’d be happy to give feedback when you have something ready, Daeus :-}

    "...the one with whom he so sought to talk has already interceded for him." -The Master and Margarita

    #48353
    J.A.Penrose
    @j-a-penrose

    @daeus-lamb Interested! Only thing is I’m sitting exams this week and next week (*dies internally*) and I’ll be vanishing for a mission trip for a week after that. Soooo, it would depend on when you could get it out and when you wanted it back. I’m happy to read it during exam week. Give me a break! πŸ˜€

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    #48382
    Evelyn
    @evelyn

    @daeus-lamb Yeah… I forgot to mention… πŸ˜› I’ll leaving in a week for a forensic competition, and won’t be back until Oct.2nd… is that okay?

    #48434
    Cassandra Hamm
    @cassandraia

    @daeus-lamb how long is it? Because I’m interested, but I’m not sure I have time…. :\

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    #48435
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    @cassandraia Oh, right! It’s about 24,000 words — a novella

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    #48443
    Daeus Lamb
    @daeus-lamb

    @evelyn That’ll probably be just fine.

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    #48451
    Elizabeth
    @elizabeth

    I’d love to read it at some point, but I dunno if I have time now, sorry!

    INTP. Writer of fantasy and sci-fi. Wannabe artist. Anime geek. Merakian.

    #48488
    Cassandra Hamm
    @cassandraia

    @daeus-lamb when would you want it by? I don’t think I’ll have time, but it’s possible….

    I crush readers' souls like grapes.

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