Brink

@andrew, Great work. Can’t wait to read the rest!

@trallion, hey! I’m a second oldest out of six too. We also homeschool.

“Why does Deathrock have a cathedral in his palace, and what’s with the fox? I am so confused!” Aleck looked around him. “This hall looks like it would lead to the grand treasure room. It is the widest hall in this place, and all the other halls seem to lead onto it. I betcha we just follow this red carpet. Too bad things aren’t usually that easy.”

@andrew @kari-karast @everyonelse

“Well, lets get going!”

@bigideaskc, I noticed that too!

“Where’s our map? Shouldn’t it show the way out of here?” Aleck asked.

“So are we safe? I don’t see any monsters.” Aleck asked. He felt rather insignificant compared to all these superpowerful people.

“I am so confused? Where are we?” Aleck asked.

And bookmarks are not for quitters. Bookmarks are for people who want to not waste time they could be reading by finding their page.

This sounds like something it might be good ot determine for my characters. And I think I might be Sanguine-Melancholic, though I really don’t know. I feel like I have some elements of all of them.

Fun!

@mariposa, I can’t wait for part two!

@mariposa, amazing story so far! Hilarious! I can’t wait for the next part!!!

@kari-karast @andrew

Yikes, this is getting dusty. Its not over yet!

Suddenly a huge octopus – or something like an octopus – burst into the room and sprayed ink everywhere.  Aleck threw his arms up to shield himself from the sticky ink, and his arms were covered with the sticky substance.

That book sounds interesting. I LOVE the Wingfeather Saga!!!!!! Best series of all time! I want to see that fanart!

@andrew

Oooh, its getting intriguing!

@andrew @kari-karast

“Okay… What just happened there?” Aleck shivered and tugged at the door. “Rats! We’re stuck in here! Lets get through this thing as fast as we can.” The room had dim lighting. “How do we get out of here?” He grabbed at the map. And a horrible ripping sound was heard, as the flimsy piece of paper was torn in two. “Oh, uh…[Read more]

Anyways, I’m not going to debate any more.

I was wrong. I realize that now.

Well I… (Not sure how to answer)

Yes and No.