Lynn Renard

Ok everyone. Tomorrow is the day we have to hand our story in. Get your votes in or it will be decided by those of us who have voted…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti

Thank you so much for doing that! I really appreciate it! We need people like you 😉

Good to know.

It was totally an accident that he found her. In fact, as the novel progresses, you find out that there is a lot more to this prologue story that what I am actually telling. 🙂 There is a fine line with revealing too much and not…[Read more]

Thank you so much guys for giving me feedback!

@missfaeriekaiti

some stylistic issues kept taking me out of the story

Do you mind if I ask exactly what issues drew you out of the story? Since this will be the first thing the readers will read, I want to make sure I keep them in the story. Colton actually finds Brianna on the ground. So they…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti Ooh, all good to know! Thanks! 🙂

@missfaeriekaiti I really like how you set the cozy feeling of the cafe. And mentioning the abandoned cups and plates added a really empty feel to it, as did the clatter of dishes out of sight. I really like how you used all of those elements together to help me see the scene.

@missfaeriekaiti Yep, I’m the Taylor that commented. 🙂

I was thinking a nickname of sort could just be Sars. Maybe it could slip out of a characters mouth during a moment because that’s what they always call him in their head.

@missfaeriekaiti Thank you for letting us read this excerpt of your story.

In terms of pacing, I think it moved along at a decent pace. It was a bit boring at times, but I liked how you didn’t just have them talking. You had them moving and doing things. I believe that helped the scene a great deal.

What if you were to give Sarsalor a nickname?…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti Thank you for reading! The wings are bird wings with feathers. And you’re right about the capitalization of the name. That was just a grammar error I made.

I can change that line. I see what you mean about it.

@brandon-miller Essentially your understanding of what the darger looks like is correct. My original thought was a…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti Now would be grand.  Just whenever you have time.

@ashlyvye @missfaeriekaiti 😀

@missfaeriekaiti Yes, I do have to be careful when I recommend his stuff. Even his fantasy has some objectionable elements (I haven’t read much of his non-high-ish fantasy at all). Rithmatist is the one I can usually recommend without any caveats, and Elantris is nearly as clean (if you don’t count one paragraph describing an underground cult’s…[Read more]

Oh wow cool, there’s a question if I’d ever seen one.  Thanks for asking, @missfaeriekaiti

The answer is YES.

First off, I wanted writers who I thought were taking writing seriously.  Even if they don’t want it to be a profession or anything, they wanted to do it well and were willing to put the effort into it.

Second, I wanted people who w…[Read more]

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@missfaeriekaiti @pookiemonster Sorry, you do not need to fill out the form again! I just retagged you to let you know the guilds were opening Wednesday. 🙂

@dekreel Well, you do need to be somewhat active. As long as you participate in the guilds a couple times a month, that would be sufficient.

Copying everyone I tagged before.

This is to let you know that the guilds are launching this Wednesday!!!

If you haven’t signed up yet, do so now so you don’t get left…[Read more]

If you haven’t signed up for a guild yet but want to, do so now. Guilds will be opening in just a couple…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti What if you have your best friend says something so insensitive, even if (or especially if) it’s honest, that it causes a rift between her and the MC? Maybe the reason she’s feeling two-dimensional is because your MC wants to have her as a friend, but there’s no “in spite of” factoring into the choice. I think in real life, we…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti Hmm. Does Riniya change over the course of the story? What do you love most about her? What do you love least about her?