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Skredder replied to the topic Cook and the Darger in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@missfaeriekaiti Thank you for reading! The wings are bird wings with feathers. And you’re right about the capitalization of the name. That was just a grammar error I made.
I can change that line. I see what you mean about it.
@brandon-miller Essentially your understanding of what the darger looks like is correct. My original thought was a mongoose with wings on its back.
It seems like I got Aldred’s personality down well. You absolutely nailed Cook. Her name is Emily, but everyone calls her Cook. I love her.
I guess I really didn’t have time to develop Casse in this short story.
Thank you both for your input on this! 🙂












