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  • Skredder replied to the topic Cook and the Darger in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago

    @missfaeriekaiti Thank you for reading! The wings are bird wings with feathers. And you’re right about the capitalization of the name. That was just a grammar error I made.

    I can change that line. I see what you mean about it.

    @brandon-miller Essentially your understanding of what the darger looks like is correct. My original thought was a mongoose with wings on its back.

    It seems like I got Aldred’s personality down well. You absolutely nailed Cook. Her name is Emily, but everyone calls her Cook. I love her.

    I guess I really didn’t have time to develop Casse in this short story.

     

    Thank you both for your input on this! 🙂

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