Tasha Van Kesteren

@melancholicwriter

Hope you don’t mind me popping in!

I really like everything about it! I do agree with Gracie though. If you made that change it would make it really neat! I do have a couple questions about it though. Is there a reason that Mia and Gabriel have to flee to the good uncle? And this is just pure curiosity, does Mia have something…[Read more]

@melancholicwriter

Sounds cool to me. I love fairy-tale retellings, so I might be a little biased.😄

I’m wondering what the point of her being an illegitimate daughter is. Is it going to be important later in the story? Also…just a random idea…what if she wasn’t actually illegitimate, but her father was hiding her true identity?

Can’t wait…[Read more]

@emma-walker,
Alright, welcome aboard!

@kylie-wingfeather
Ooh yeah I totally get that I’m already on two character castles, a collaborative and my WIP plus going to be trying to find a job pretty soon lol. Thanks for replying!

@taylorclogston
Oh that sounds cool! Thanks! I’d be really interested to see what a more structured RP looks like :)…[Read more]

I think @zee and @arindown made good points here. I read this thread a long time ago, and been trying to figure out how to help. Okay, here I go~

• I don’t know what country you’re from or your age, but do you happen to be a minor when it comes to crimes of a sexual locus (i.e., rape, assault, etc.)? If so, then in my opinion, it may be…

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Ack, I’m so abominably late, I’m so so sorry! I can’t keep up with another castle right now, at least I better not (ahhhh shiny new project syndrome!). But maybe I can give it a boost by inviting a couple other people? My favorite part is how unpredictable character castle are and you really have to know your characters to roleplay them when you c…[Read more]

@melancholicwriter gotcha! That definitely makes sense now 😀

@melancholicwriter

Oooh, a portal fantasy! That sounds interesting right away! 😀

I guess my biggest critique is that I’d want to know why 1) the MC is transferred to another world (is one of her parents from there and she doesn’t know it, maybe?), and 2) why the king would send her on the quest. Is there something special about her? What is the…[Read more]

“Did. . . did you lose someone too?” Hermione asked tentatively.

Rupert looked up. He hadn’t expected that question.

But the girl deserved an answer of some kind.

“Not just one.”

Before anyone could ask him to elaborate, the door opened, and Kalmar, Harry, Ron, and Rex came through. Kal was leading a strange girl. Her hair was blonde, and her…[Read more]

@melancholicwriter

Yep, you can bring in as many characters as you can keep track of.

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The new girl, Mercedes, sighed. “This isn’t like the last time I’ve been taken from my world,” she said.

Hermione perked up at this.

“You’ve left your world before?” Hermione asked curiously, and Mercedes nodded. “What was it like? Was it anything at all…[Read more]

…The only problem that I can really see is logical, @melancholicwriter . If the king himself has sorcery and sent them on this quest, how would the imposter get past his guard to go with them as his son? And how would the true son be with them, similarly?

@lonathecat the children are actually those of the protagonists from both previous books,…[Read more]

@melancholicwriter

Oh ok, thanks. Just had to make sure I didn’t need to write from any of my character’s PoVs.

@melancholicwriter

Using your own character is perfectly fine. Is the boy she ran into any specific character?

Oh, Mercedes is such an awesome name! And her story sounds really interesting…

Also, I forgot to mention, at this moment Harry, Ron, Kalmar, and Rex (a Star Wars character brought in by @wingiby-iggiby) are off looking for snacks.

@melancholicwriter

I’m not sure exactly what you mean, sorry, but I don’t think so?

@melancholicwriter

All ages are welcome! 😛 But fifteen is perfect, because most of the characters in the castle right now are kids or young teens.