Ava Murbarger

Same!  I wrote in third person a lot, and I don’t think I started trying out first person until I wrote Saskia’s first POV.  It’s way easier to get into your character’s heads, but descriptions are harder, at least for me.  But that’s one of the beautiful things about this game!  It’s all about experimentation and learning 🙂

Yikes!  Are you…[Read more]

@mamaauthoress growth is growth, even if it occurs at the rate of a redwood tree lol

Aww man!  Well if SE ever lets you, I would love to see some!

Idk Ruan, are you sure about that?

Ruan’s quite physically intimidating, right?  At least, that’s the impression I have!  Something tells me he’s kind of oblivious though…

Really?  I’m gla…[Read more]

Basil:

“I … come from a den of thieves,” the man mumbled, eyes downcast. “I was raised in a village full of immorality and crime, the son of a single mother.”

I narrow my eyes up at him.  He sounds embarrassed, no, ashamed.  But of what?  I thought all areas of human habitation are full of immorality and crime.  And isn’t it normal to be the chi…[Read more]

“What’s your opinion?”

Nithel’s blood ran cold a moment when he heard those words, upon realizing they were directed at him.

The dragon rumbled, “We should move on.”

The thing’s presence was unsettling, but Nithel thought the phrase had saved him from answering. Nithel slowly stood with his new bag, sheathing his knife.

“Noted.” Alessio looke…[Read more]

“Well,” Brendin said with a wry smile, “last time I tried to negotiate with an eldritch being, I lost something.”
He motioned his false arm, the one that Alessio had noticed earlier and dismissed just as quickly.
“Granted I’ve not had much luck fighting them either.” He showed the scars across his torso, not much better than Alessio’s sca…[Read more]

Malvat was never pulled out, but he also has no handler: does Malvat slowly become a wraith and descend into madness or does Malvat become the Castle’s avatar…?

Of course, I’m oBvIouslY sweet!
Jk! Love you, Sonicup!!

*squeezes tightly*

Whacking sibling good!! 😀

IKR!!!

yay!

*Fred’s voice* It’s called recycling! LOL
YES!!…[Read more]

Pia’s eyes widened. “How? When did this take place?” She asked almost incredulously.

Kallun gently put a hand on her shoulder, “Pia…” he murmured. “Calm down a minute.”

K’Nika frowned. “A few months ago. I’m the only one that escaped…”

Pia shook her head. “That was my father’s doing and his alone. I apologize for his… his… abominable-“

”Pia!…[Read more]

(that’s great. Have you seen the one with the guy that says “liberty-biberty”?)

Ellie and Julian looked at each other for a moment. Something else was going on here. Could it be related to the wizard?

@erynne yeah my nickname is Emu, or Limu emu XD so

(Lolol my email I use for google stuff and following blogs is limuemu. My regular use one is different)

Kallun cocked head a little. “I actually might. K’Nika Ceubherna?” He gazed at the girl.

She nodded. “You’re Mallea.” Her purple eyes lit in realization. “You’re one of the Light Princes.”

“And I’ve seen you in the Realm.” Kallun nodded…[Read more]

(thanks for subscribing! AHHH YOUR EMAIL IS LIMUEMU!!! Did you get that from the liberty mutual commercial?)

“Do you know her?” ellie whispered to Kallun

@joelle-stone

Wow. You really outdid yourself. That format is helpful for me to see where I need editing. Thanks so much. I honestly facepalmed so many times cause I saw those stupid grammatical errors. Alas, computer spellcheck can be a terrible and unnoticeable enemy😂

On those adjectives, however, I totally get that, and your help…[Read more]

The girl hesitated a moment. “K’Nika…”

Pia stepped closer, saying, “you’re one of the Allawn tribe people, yes?”

But as Pia stepped forward, instant fear flooded over K’NikA’s face and she back away from her with a cry.

Pia stopped.

(Sorry, my internet has been really blah lately. Seems to be better today)

“Who are you?” Ellie asked gently

@crazywriter,

Ok, let’s get this ball rolling! I’m trying to do this in a Google Docs like format by striking through things I think should be removed and putting my suggestions in bold and comments in italics. Let me know if it didn’t make sense, and feel free to reject any and all suggestions. 😉

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The next day, Abner woke to find the mornin…[Read more]

Hrm … looks like I randomly changed from 3rd to 1st person.

Pardon me. 😅

Rúan is just easier to write in 1st, since I like to get into his head.

Hi folks. Just finished recovering from Christmas and Covid in a large family back to back.

Klein leaned back. Quite a lot had happened. Qatar wasn’t dead. The melee that the “lord castle” has wanted seemed to be unofficially over. Liorah was back though she seemed different. She promptly began an argument with Lorcan. Someone else appeared as…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I have a sparkling personality, I know

Yes, that’s what I meant. Lots of sparkles.

@this-is-not-an-alien

Shut up in the Peanut Gallery, Camirvablahblah.

🙃

@kimlikesart

Kimmi doffs her feathered cap and twiddles it, before waving shyly. “Hello everyone.” She gives a short bow, then smiles. “It’s a pleasure to meet you!”

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