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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic “The Cullings” RP-ing Thread in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
*sheepish grin* Why, hello there. Your RP-ing call summoned me.
I second Rose’s questions. 🙂
Uh, Idk…. I didn’t know that was the plan–but I can do so with no problem!
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“Do not let me hold you back.” Nithel said with a small smile that made Alessio smile back a little, suddenly warm inside and a little bewildered by it. “But be careful Alessio.”
His friend’s protectiveness touched him, although he had a hard time taking it seriously with everything that’d already happened to him. It seemed like a fact of fate tha…[Read more] -
Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
(@everyone I’mma use this to set up something for Brendin, so if you wouldn’t mind the other characters not going past the veil for a bit that would be great. 🙂 )
“Perhaps,” he murmured to the man with the grey eyes. “Perhaps we should proceed with caution.”
Brendin glanced at the dragon warily, but ignored his warning for the moment. …[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Congrats!
@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien
So when i introduce my character, where in the castle should i start?
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“..Nithel?” Alessio whispered.
Nithel’s eyes lifted to him. Pained, but the man attempted a small smile for his friend, that slowly dwindled as he saw fear in Alessio’s eyes. He was sorry. About something. Is it- He cares about my tears. Yet unshed. Nithel’s lips twitched a small bit, teasing a grateful smile. Then Alessio touched Nithel’s arm,…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Alessio blinked, trying to shrug off his thoughts, and glanced up. Beside him, Nithel seemed upset. Had he done something, what’s wrong? Maybe something he said reminded Nithel of some old wound or…Nithel was sad for him…?
Things are better or…at least getting better. I’m fine, it’s ok. Please don’t cry. He never should’ve said anything, he sh…[Read more]
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Winter Rose replied to the topic “The Cullings” RP-ing Thread in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I can write a bit, but I’m not exactly sure where on the timeline to start. Should it be when the characters win the spot in the Cullings, or should it be more like right when all the players are boarding the Resilience?
Oh, and is everyone writing in first person?
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
(Sorry for the delay, my brother got engaged and life became very chaotic all of a sudden)
After what may have been hours or minutes – or possibly days, it was tremendously difficult to discern in this castle – and a great deal of winding downwards, the corridor deposited them into a spacious circular room with a few other chambers leading off it…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
Hi Erynne! Thanks for joining!
Also, don’t laugh too hard. I wrote it back when I was still new to writing XD
No worries! You can probably do better now, but it actually isn’t that bad!
I really like it, but I think you can describe it a little broader and more concisely, and it would be cool if you connected their appearances to their p…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Nithel had tensed the smallest bit when Jericho touched Alessio. Then he felt relief as Alessio didn’t pull away.
She was being kind to him. Nithel smiled a bit, sadness touching underneath it.
But the way Alessio stared at his hand when Jericho released… Nithel blinked several times and swallowed hard, smile evaporating. Nithel ached so much…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
I’m so glad I could help!
That small bit of description carries a lot of story and gives me an immediate sense of the characterr! Awesome!
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Crazywriter replied to the topic “Escape from Ackerley” a collaborative story in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
I agree! The .75 is super important! Honestly, and this may sound weird, but usually people taller than me scare me. So I’m glad I am in the company of non scary people. 😉
how old are you? Sorry I forgot.
Ill get a post out soon!
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Winter Rose replied to the topic Is anyone interested in collaborating on a story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Ok, sorry I just wasn’t sure exactly how I would start something like that.
Okay. Are @wingiby-iggiby and @melodyjoy still with us?
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Rose replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
Hi Joelle!
Here’s my opinion:
Your description is good, but I think you’re getting slightly too bogged down in the details. (I do that too, like, always XD)
If you give your descriptions all in one place, (eye color, build, age, hair color, clothing) readers tend to forget or skip over it, because they’re more interested in w…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Alessio blinked, staring up at Nithel.
Nithel’s chest ached for him, and he held the youth’s eyes as he thought. Take your time my friend.
It’s alright, Nithel was about to think, you don’t have to. When Alessio spoke.
“I…don’t know how to,”
Nithel’s chest dropped, filling with sorrow and concern. You don’t know how to. Nithel’s eyes lowered…[Read more]
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Rose started the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 5 years, 1 month ago
So, this is something I really struggle with and am trying to improve on, so I decided that (like most things) it can be turned into a fun and hopefully helpful game. Here’s how it works:
Post a short description of any of your characters, and critique someone who posted earlier.
Now, just to be clear, this isn’t about what the characters…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Jericho smiled, a pleasant and friendly smile, when Alessio finished his story. “That was quite a display,” she told him warmly. “You have a gift for telling tales, my young friend.”
“I have a tale. It is not a happy one, although I hope it ends well.”
“I am sure it is a tale worth sharing,” Jericho said, “but I am beginning to think that…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@joelle-stone @skylarynn @this-is-not-an-alien
*stumbles in*
Nithel’s got a crush. Oh dear dear dear dear dear…
He doesn’t even know what that word means, and the feeling isn’t even completely formed but- *stops, and blinks a few times* He does. He… is having weird feelings for Jericho. His first time… oy… *babies grow up fast* *…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Alessio moved closer to Nithel, and his heart warmed, eyes gaining some peace. Happiness.
Then the youth spoke, in just a whisper. His eyes were careful, testing as they stared at him. “If you treat yourself like you’re worth nothing you’ll attract people who believe it.”
Nithel looked down, heart swirling. Was he believing that for himself…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
“If you wish to hear my story, I’m afraid I’ll disappoint.” Brendin said quietly. Alessio dropped his gaze, trying very hard not to look disappointed.
“How so?” Jericho asked
“I know only fragments of it.” he replied uneasily “I remember little.”
Was it because of magic? Alessio’s memories had been selectively buried until he hadn’t even known he…[Read more] - Load More












