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				<title>WisdomOfProse started the topic November Writing Group in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95554/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 20 Oct 2021 17:11:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/ashira/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ashira</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/wisdomofprose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wisdomofprose</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rochellaine/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rochellaine</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/scarletimmortalized/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scarletimmortalized</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/eden-anderson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@eden-anderson</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/libby/' rel="nofollow ugc">@libby</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/selah-chelyah/' rel="nofollow ugc">@selah-chelyah</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/samantha-pen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@samantha-pen</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/holly-anne/' rel="nofollow ugc">@holly-anne</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a></p>
<p>Hello!</p>
<p>This is Shira/ <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/wisedomofprose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@WisedomOfProse</a>! I&#8217;ve been fairly busy lately, (hence, my disappearance) my apologies. At any rate, a friend of mine opened a group on the Band app for NaNoWriMo/Writers recently!&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-95554"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/95554/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94643/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 25 Aug 2021 17:35:44 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .</p>
<p>Okay, it has.</p>
<p>Tell me what you all think of this poem.</p>
<p><em><strong>Rainbow in Waterdrops</strong></em></p>
<p>Come down&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-94643"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/94643/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Ashley Tegart replied to the topic Wordpress Questions in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/93135/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2021 19:53:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a></p>
<p>Thank you so much for the information! I had no idea you could search for stock photos on WordPress&#8211;I just tried that on a post draft and it&#8217;s huge help! 🙂 I&#8217;ll have to check out that website for WordPress themes.</p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/92014/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 12 May 2021 16:14:27 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!</p>
<p><em><strong>Twenty-One</strong></em><br />
Sometimes I don&#8217;t think I qualify<br />
For twenty-one<br />
Weighed down by the times I have to try<br />
I&#8217;ve never&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-92014"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/92014/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emma Walker replied to the topic Blogging suggestions ? in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/91089/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Apr 2021 21:10:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Also <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> and <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-m-archer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-m-archer</a> what do you mean by saying your blog is hosted?</p>
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				<title>Emma Walker replied to the topic Blogging suggestions ? in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Apr 2021 16:52:56 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/91001/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 07 Apr 2021 18:00:51 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, I guess I&#8217;ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.</p>
<p>Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!</p>
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<p><em><strong>True North</strong></em></p>
<p>It seems that all the world has lost it&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-91001"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/91001/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Cassandra Blenkin replied to the topic Hello there! (General Kenobi!) in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89975/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 11 Mar 2021 06:51:29 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/winter_rose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@winter_rose</a> I also like My Little Pony, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Lord of the Rings, The Eagle of the Ninth Chronicles. And yeah, I&#8217;m really trying to make my character likeable and someone audiences can relate to and root for. I&#8217;m also super protective and want to take care of my clone troopers!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> That&#8217;s ok, I was a star trek fan&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-89975"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89975/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Winter Rose replied to the topic Hello there! (General Kenobi!) in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89943/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 10 Mar 2021 15:54:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a><br />
Here’s my perspective on that question:</p>
<p>Episode IX was a cool movie. It had visual appeal, great acting, a complex plot, and emotional intensity.</p>
<p>But it had a really high standard to reach for, and some just don’t think it got there.</p>
<p>I think one problem was that the makers lost Carrie Fisher and had to do a lot of rewriting. I don&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-89943"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89943/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89383/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 24 Feb 2021 17:46:29 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Don&#8217;t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome! <em><strong></p>
<p>My Morning Song (What you will say to me)</strong></em></p>
<p>The sunlight is dawning<br />
And though I am still&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-89383"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89383/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89045/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 10 Feb 2021 19:58:05 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hope you all enjoy!</p>
<p><em><strong>All of the Pieces<br />
</strong></em>All of my pieces I&#8217;d scattered o&#8217;er<br />
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor<br />
All of my days were lost so empty<br />
Then You came and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-89045"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/89045/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88194/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2021 19:19:27 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!</p>
<p><em><strong>Resolutions</strong></em></p>
<p>I wrote my list of resolutions<br />
Not to create my own solutions<br />
I want to live like my&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-88194"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/88194/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/87274/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2020 21:33:39 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Merry Christmas!!</p>
<p><em><strong>My Christmas Prayer</strong></em><br />
All the lights are hung, twinkling<br />
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls<br />
By the window the tree is shining<br />
Crowned with a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-87274"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/87274/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Chalice replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2020 19:35:43 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hey Jenna! I wasn&#8217;t sure where to get in touch with you where I can attach an image, so I hope this works. 🙂 Here&#8217;s my drawing of your character, Scarlett. I hope you like it! 🙂</p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 30 Nov 2020 20:00:04 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .</p>
<p>Anyway, this week&#8217;s is rather short. Just something I started singing to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-86696"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86696/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2020 19:43:17 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!</p>
<p><strong>Rest in Him</strong></p>
<p>I know where there is a hushed abode<br />
If in my life the longings are heavy load<br />
A&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-86020"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/86020/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Oct 2020 18:09:12 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here&#8217;s this week&#8217;s.</p>
<p>Along the lanes and the country road<br />
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive<br />
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wine</p>
<p>Blown on the wind of a stormy&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-85585"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/85585/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/85210/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2020 17:17:38 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂</p>
<p><em><strong>Thank You for Forgiving Me</strong></em></p>
<p>Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide<br />
Once I lived like a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-85210"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/85210/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/84643/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2020 15:28:14 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!</p>
<p>This week&#8217;s is one that I wrote more recently.  It&#8217;s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.</p>
<p>As usual,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-84643"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/84643/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/83355/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 12 Aug 2020 16:21:12 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A</p>
<p>And if you have written any poetry you&#8217;d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂</p>
<p><em><strong>My&hellip;</strong></em><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-83355"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/83355/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 30 Jul 2020 00:01:18 -0400</pubDate>

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Thank you, Jenna! I&#8217;m sorry, I wasn&#8217;t sure if I ever thanked you! (By the way, I love your blog! I&#8217;m always looking for it in my inbox! (: )</p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jul 2020 17:51:47 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!</p>
<p><em><strong>Bloom (Where you are)</strong> </em><br />
Flower, you&#8217;re crowned with a jewel-like bud<br />
But all you think about is that&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-82559"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/82559/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jul 2020 18:29:16 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/parker/' rel="nofollow ugc">@parker</a>) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-82106"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/82106/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81892/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 12 Jul 2020 19:47:20 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Sorry I&#8217;m a little behind! This week&#8217;s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-81892"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81892/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus Lamb started the topic archiving the guilds in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Jun 2020 01:47:46 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81201/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jun 2020 16:13:40 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Two poems this week!</p>
<p>This one is another &#8216;spontaneous inspiration&#8217; one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-81201"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81201/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Selah CJW replied to the topic ISBNs, Copyrights, the whole lot/// in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 13 Jun 2020 20:11:28 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks, Jenna! I found the place to purchase them and all, and learned about them, I just didn&#8217;t know what others&#8217; experiences might recommend. 🙂</p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80659/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 12 Jun 2020 17:44:58 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!</p>
<p><em><strong>Watchmen (Sound it Loud)</strong> </em></p>
<p>Watchman,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-80659"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80659/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Sci-fi novella: How to write? in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/80300/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Jun 2020 21:53:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> Thank you! 😀</p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79926/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2020 16:33:16 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hope you all are doing well.  As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂</p>
<p><em><strong>Torchlighters</strong></em></p>
<p>Go! the torch must be carried on<br />
All the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79926"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79926/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Sci-fi novella: How to write? in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2020 18:26:39 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/anne_the_noob14/' rel="nofollow ugc">@anne_the_noob14</a> &#8211; WOW what a super cool premise! 😀 Seriously, I want to read that story NOW.</p>
<p>*ahem* My first instinct, like what <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> said, is that the reader doesn&#8217;t need to know all that information up front. In fact I think it&#8217;s better that they don&#8217;t, a better hook, because it&#8217;s <em>mysterious</em> when the MC talks/thinks/references things&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79768"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79768/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Sci-fi novella: How to write? in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2020 16:49:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> *nods* Let me give you a summary of the plot real quick&#8230;</p>
<p>MC lives in a country where every child, at birth, has some sensors and a receptor surgically implanted in his brain and shoulder, respectively. The point of this is to sense when the person is feeling a heightened level of emotion (very sad, very happy, etc.), and give the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79756"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79756/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79080/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2020 18:16:25 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79080"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/79080/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77849/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2020 16:18:28 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.</p>
<p>This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-77849"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/77849/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76923/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 01 Apr 2020 17:06:38 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!</p>
<p><em><strong>The Surrendering</strong> </em></p>
<p>I&#8217;m down to my last&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76923"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76923/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>WisdomOfProse replied to the topic Beta Readers For Short Story in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76394/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 19 Mar 2020 01:19:36 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hey everyone!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve started a newsletter (which launches in a week) where I&#8217;ll post updates,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76394"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76394/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76379/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 18 Mar 2020 17:19:36 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn&#8217;t get -get it! In the end,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76379"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76379/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Feb 2020 17:29:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> Thank you so much!  🙂</p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Feb 2020 15:26:58 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-75004"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75004/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Beta Readers Wanted For My HF Kids&#039; Short Story in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73797/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Feb 2020 07:45:32 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Aw thanks 🙂</p>
<p>That&#8217;s good to hear&#8230;I&#8217;m glad you didn&#8217;t find it confusing xD</p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73690/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 12 Feb 2020 16:10:56 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!</p>
<p><em><strong>Awaken the Dawn</strong> </em><br />
Up the pale granite heights I climb.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-73690"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73690/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Beta Readers Wanted For My HF Kids&#039; Short Story in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73461/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 11 Feb 2020 06:41:50 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks so much to both of you for being happy to beta read my story 🙂 I really appreciate it, and especially all the helpful feedback you both gave.</p>
<p>Quick question &#8211;</p>
<p>Did either of you find it confusing when near the end of the book it changes from first person to third person? I have had a few people say it was&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-73461"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73461/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Beta Readers Wanted For My HF Kids&#039; Short Story in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73353/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 09 Feb 2020 00:47:46 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Aw thanks so much 🙂 I really appreciate you doing that.</p>
<p>No worries though if you don&#8217;t get to tho 🙂</p>
<p>Yes, that&#8217;s totally fine&#8230;I granted access btw.</p>
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				<title>Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Anyone Need a Beta Reader? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73317/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 08 Feb 2020 06:24:04 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi *waves*</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know if you&#8217;re still offering your beta services ;), but if so, I&#8217;m looking for people to beta read my short story for kids. It&#8217;s a war story set during WWI and WWII xD</p>
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				<title>Katthewriter replied to the topic Yuri Snippet- The Dreadful Miss Perfect Princess Pigeon and her Zombie Rats in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72787/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 03 Feb 2020 16:33:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> good! !</p>
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				<title>Katthewriter replied to the topic Yuri Snippet 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72786/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 03 Feb 2020 16:32:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> maybe xP</p>
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				<title>Katthewriter replied to the topic Yuri Snippet 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72706/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 02 Feb 2020 01:33:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> ack! Sorry i forgot to tag you when i did this one</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/taylorclogston/' rel="nofollow ugc">@taylorclogston</a></p>
<p>Yuri snippet 2</p>
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				<title>Katthewriter replied to the topic Anyone Need a Beta Reader? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72704/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 02 Feb 2020 01:28:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jenwriter17/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jenwriter17</a> can you do this survey for Finding You?</p>
<p>Its still the same amount as from when you read it.</p>
<p><a href="https://www.surveymonkey.com/r/FS2V9Q6" rel="nofollow ugc">https://www.surveymonkey.com/r/FS2V9Q6</a></p>
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				<title>Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72171/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jan 2020 16:22:18 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This is not my usual style of poetry, but the inspiration hit so hard . . . I had to write it. Critique it heartless&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-72171"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72171/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus Lamb started the topic Introducing GROUPS in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72157/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jan 2020 15:42:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey SE people!</p>
<p>We&#8217;ve launched a cool new feature on the forum called groups.</p>
<p>You can find them in the nav bar like so:</p>
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<p>Groups are hubs for writers to gather around something they share in common. They include a Facebook-like feed and most of them also include their own forums.</p>
<p>So far there are three types of groups:<br />
1. Word war&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-72157"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72157/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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