Beta Readers For Short Story

[WisdomOfProse]

@ashira @wisdomofprose @rochellaine @scarletimmortalized @eden-anderson @libby @seekjustice @selah-chelyah @samantha-pen

Hello Everyone!

I need Beta Readers for my latest short story. I would appreciate any comments and critique (from story structure and character development to dialogue to grammar!) so much! Please invite others if you can! I’d love to know your thoughts on it! 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N96NL_5tHczSMrpnQ0omXXdDPzHgQcDB_VC7pikZAWk/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you and Blessings!

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[Holly Anne]

Sure, I’d love to 🙂

"You mustn't be afraid to dream a little bigger darling" (Inception)
Composer, Writer, Sarcastic 😉

[Selah CJW]

@wisdomofprose

Thanks for tagging me! I would love to read it, and will do so as I can…I have another one to finish before I can do a ton just yet. 😀

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[eden anderson]

Thanks for tagging me! I’ll take a look. 🙂

"But how could you live and have no story to tell?" - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

[WisdomOfProse]

Forgive me for the late reply, I’ve been fairly busy this week!

@holly-anne

Thank you so much for taking the time! Your comments were so helpful and encouraged me so much. I hope you enjoyed reading it! 🙂

Please count on me for any Beta reading projects!

Blessings!

@selah-chelyah

Thank you so much for the kind comments! I really appreciate your taking time out for this! BTW, so glad you liked the title! Titles are one of my favorite parts. 😉

@eden-anderson

Thank you! 🙂 I hope you enjoy reading it!

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[eden anderson]

@wisdomofprose I’m sure I will! 😊

"But how could you live and have no story to tell?" - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

[Holly Anne]

@wisdomofprose

My pleasure 🙂 I really, really enjoyed reading it!!!

Aww thanks 🙂 I will definately take you up on that sometime…if I ever finish a book lol!!!

I’d love to read/critique any more that you have… 🙂

"You mustn't be afraid to dream a little bigger darling" (Inception)
Composer, Writer, Sarcastic 😉

[WisdomOfProse]

@ashira @wisdomofprose @rochellaine @scarletimmortalized @eden-anderson @libby @seekjustice @selah-chelyah @samantha-pen @holly-anne @jenwriter17 (if you’ve already subscribed, don’t worry I’m just tagging you so you can be added to the thread 🙂 )

Hey everyone!

I’ve started a newsletter (which launches in a week) where I’ll post updates, quotes, reading recommendations, prompts, and freebies (This month I’ll include a downloadable desktop and mobile wallpaper with a quote)! And I would love to have you all as subscribers! Please invite others if you can!

https://mailchi.mp/41ced0d46680/dinewsletter

Thank you all and may God richly bless you all and keep your imaginations ablaze! Keep safe!

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[eden anderson]

@wisdomofprose OHMYGOODNESS. I just realized that I told you I’d read your story and then NEVER did. That was like eight months ago! 😟 I am so sorry!

"But how could you live and have no story to tell?" - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

[WisdomOfProse]

@eden-anderson
No worries! You’re fine! 🙂 I completely understand that life can get really busy. Or you simply forget (both of which have happened to me). 🙂

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[eden anderson]

@wisdomofprose I read your story! 😀 I liked it! You have a way with words and some of your descriptions were SO GOOD!! 🤩 Thanks for sharing it with us!

"But how could you live and have no story to tell?" - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

[Selah CJW]

@wisdomofprose

Loved reading your short story! Really awesome- though it looks like most of my edits are still unresolved, lol.

I’ll  check out + share the newsletter. Sounds really cool. 🙂

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[WisdomOfProse]

@eden-anderson
I’m so sorry it’s taken me so long to answer! Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I’m just curious, how would you recommend that I tweak the plot (because I think the plot is my weakest point) so it’s a lot more cohesive? (I’d love your opinion on it too Selah!)

@selah-chelyah
Thank you so much for all the work you put into my little story! I am so so thankful! Yes, I still have to get to editing that…I’m not sure how it’s all supposed to work on Google Docs, to be quite frank! XD Does it delete the comments when you resolve them?

Thank you so much for subscribing and sharing! I appreciate that!

 

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[eden anderson]

@wisdomofprose You’re totally fine! 😀 Absolutely, thanks for letting me read it!

Oh, well I don’t really have any suggestions. I feel like I’m too inexperienced to be giving out advice…lots of times I can “feel” something is wrong but I have no idea how to fix it. 😬😂

"But how could you live and have no story to tell?" - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

[Selah CJW]

@wisdomofprose

Sorry I didn’t see this til now! XD *facepalm*

Yes, resolving them will make them disappear from the Doc, though you can access them and bring them back later if you needed to for some reason. Thanks for letting me read it! It took me quite a while to figure out how Google Docs works, as well.

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