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  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

     

    Hmmmm, Gwendolyn has her sword with her too. If they used the real ones it would be more intense, if they used fake ones it would leave room for more fun. Either way this is going to be fun.

    Ha ha! That would be h<i>ilarious</i>! Maybe we can have Maewyn pop in for a visit sometime.

     

    Gwendolyn

    There is a pause, then the metallic voice…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @joelle-stone

    Yes! Wow, you guessed that quickly. I guess I’ll have to work on my riddle-making skills, Lol.

     

    Everyone: I’m loving all the ideas popping up! This is both  creative and hilarious at the same time!

     

    Gwendolyn

     

    “Okay, another inanimate object,” Liorah said, “Probably another element, by the sound of it. ‘chains cannot contai…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Same here(I think)! I’ve never really tried, I want to get better at it though, it just seems like a really cool thing to know how to make. I’m going to try too make my own, so let me know if you have any ideas or pointers!

    GWENDOLYN

    “There’s a panel in the ceiling. It’s too small for us,” Liorah said, answering the question for Brin.…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Exactly! The way my my friend and I made the story, her character was the smart one, and my character was the strong one so they complemented each other as a team.

     

    Ok, also, did you find your riddle online or make it up? I’m very inexperienced at riddle making, do you think you could give me some pointers?

    BTW  your riddle was awsome

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Yes! In the second riddle I’ll have her “accidentally ” say a clue. She isn’t the smart one in her story, so she won’t be the one actually solving the riddles, (unless I can figure out how to make her accidentally stumble onto the answer).

    Yes, I was going to do it on the staircase but I’ll throw Brin in while there still in the trap.…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

     

    I actually memorized the riddle and my family started brainstorming on what it might be. Our best guess was a cloud or fog.

     

    That would be so cool! My only worry is Riure… Maybe she could team up with someone. Hmmm, maybe Gwen and Liorah could have a mini battle then in the next trap we could have a bigger battle or laser tag…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @rose-colored-fancy

    Ahhhhhh! I love riddles! I’m not very good at them though,🤔 Neither is Gwen.

    Once they figure out the riddles, maybe the castle could have them fight? I just thought it was a interesting idea but if you don’t like it we could just have them join another group.

     

     

     

    Gwendolyn

     

    “Nothing in particular, but the idea t…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Alright! Let the Gwendolyn personality experimenting begin!

     

    GWENDOLYN

     

    I knocked an arrow as I neared the next room, my mind and body tense. I was prepared, I was ready for whatever the castle would throw at me.

    Thick metal plates suddenly flew out of the ceiling, creating a small room around me. I jumped at the sound of someone shouting…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    I’m ok with trapping  Gwendolyn with any of the characters. This is going to be awesome either way.

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

     

     

    Ok, thanks! I’m glad you like Gwendolyn’s personality, hopefully I don’t ruin it while I’m experimenting 😛

  • *pulls forum out of the deep dark pit of lost forums and dusts it off*

    Woops, how did that get there?

     

     

    Farley didn’t move. Even when she heard Ash ask what happened, she didn’t move. Maybe if she stayed still, she would wake up and realize it was a dream.

    Why had she done that? Why had Akaya stayed behind, even when she knew she was in d…[Read more]

  • Jasmine replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

     

    I like it! I think it will give me a little practice for Gwendolyn’s personality. She is supposed to be cocky, a bit of a smart Alec, and fiery, but I don’t think  I’m doing that good of a job at it. 😏

     

     

     

     

    GWENDOLYN

     

    Two ear splitting bangs echoed through the room and I felt myself grow heavy. My left foot was still stuck be…[Read more]

  • GWENDOLYN

    My head whipped around at the sound of explosions. I remembered hearing the warning for intruders, I guess they’re here.

    A moment ago this was stupid and comical, now its dead serious. Someone could get hurt, this is real.

    I stop my frantic flailing and think. Liorah was getting around fine by pushing of of surfaces, but I had already…[Read more]

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    I was part of that story for a bit, I exited to write with some of the characters again! It’s like getting to see a friend you haven’t seen for a wile.

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    Thank you so much! It’s been really fun writing with you and I think its cool how we stuck together when the flabbit room shut down. Goodbye for now, come back soon!

     

     

    @mischievous-thwapling

    Wait…is this the same Zanar from Rebeca twelve’s Collaborative story? The one who got plastered with the bowl of Ice cream?

    Ha ha I just…[Read more]

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    Ha ha! It’s funny how your own characters can surprise you. That happens to me to.

     

     

    Thanks! I really couldn’t picture Gwendolyn going down without a fight. Actually, if everyone would have been on the other side of the door she probably would have just let it happen, but since she wasn’t the only one in danger, she felt the need to…[Read more]

  • Those where so good! They had my totally engrossed and…*takes a giant ball of tissues from the quickly emptying box*. I almost felt as if we where about to kill of a bunch of characters even though I knew we wouldn’t.

     

    Gwendolyn

    “I’m sorry,” Riure said, “but I believe it’s best if I stay. I know where my assurance lies, and he won’t fail me.…[Read more]

  • Oreo can read everything we pose but she can’t pose herself. You all probably already know that, lol.

     

    Of course! I’m glad the team is back together again!

     

     

  • —Post from Oreo:—

    Hey everyone!!!

    I’m so glad that Kylie thought of this idea. It will be nice to be able to work on our story again with you guys.

    I read over what you guys have posted on the story. I like how it is going so far but I do have a couple of questions.

    1. Did Jason disappear, or is he still with the rest of the characters?

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  • I will! Ill post her post tomorrow. 😁

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