J.A.Penrose

@j-a-penrose Everything’s been a bit quiet since our victory. Everything alright? Any new wars or challenges? *rubs hands in anticipation*

Sorry for another belated installment! 😅 Between an SE retreat, Realm Makers, and settling into my new job here, I’ve barely had time to catch my breath (hopefully August will be slower).

For those of you who have missed portions of this story, you can click here for the first installment, here for the second, here for the third, and here for t…[Read more]

@j-a-penrose I heard there was a guild war or something going on this week. Is that true? (We haven’t heard from you in a while, either. I hope everything’s okay. <3)

@j-a-penrose I’m leaving today or tomorrow (most likely today) for Florida, and won’t be back until really late Saturday. So expect me to be offline until Monday-ish. Thanks! 😀

@j-a-penrose Thank you so much! 😀 I thought I did make a project…*puzzled* is it saying I have not? (I still need to add some stuff, like cover and synopsis and excerpts and things, but I think it’s still up…)

@j-a-penrose

@daeus-lamb

@jenwriter17

Aaah, thanks everyone for the great advice! I think your idea’s about 1. Writing it down solidly and 2. having someone to bounce idea’s off of are great! ^_^ I’ll for sure start doing those and see how they work out!

@j-a-penrose

Of course! 🙂

@noodle-mum and other topic stalkers…

I will tag some people that might be able to help you out. 🙂

@daeus-lamb  @snapper  @jane-maree  @brandon-miller  @j-a-penrose  @jenwriter17  @cindy  @evelyn  @r-m-archer

I know this is late, but I decided to jump in super informally. XD @j-a-penrose If there’s still room, I’d love to be added. My username is A.J.Rhys. I have little to no info up about myself, but I’ll try to add more as things progress. 🙂

@j-a-penrose OH MY GOSH WAHT?! WE FINALLY WON?? 😱

GREAT JOB, EVERYONE!! 😄 I wasn’t there as much as I probably should have been for the editing process, but I read it just now, and you all did a fantastic job!!

@steward-of-the-pen @azeline-d

@j-a-penrose @everybody.else

ACKKKKK!!!!! *throws tons of confetti* *breaks out disco music* *hands cool shades to everybody*

YAY!!! We won we won we won we won we won!!!!!!

@j-a-penrose @ariella-newheart @steward-of-the-pen and everybody else!!!

AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!😆😆😆😆😆 *leaps over moon and dances around sun, then rides a tidal wave of asteroids for joy*

AMAZING story, and great job to everybody who participated!! We WON!!!

I’m so sorry I couldn’t be a part of helping to achieve this amazing victory, but next time…[Read more]

@j-a-penrose Thanks for trying.  I think we all did.  Good job anyway, guys!  No shame in being busy sometimes.

@j-a-penrose Thank you! <3

@j-a-penrose Well, hey. At least it’s five years..!

Thank you! 🙂 She’s doing much better now. She goes back to MD Anderson later this year, I think, for a checkup, but they’ve moved the time between checkups to something like 18 months instead of the twice-a-year thing there at first after they let her come home. It’s been a long, hard few…[Read more]

About to read the doc now. Apologies for not doing it sooner, since I have been on SE for a bit today. (yay, me, for being somewhat active)

@j-a-penrose Oog. Sounds like you’ve had fun. *winces* Sorry about you having all this trouble. My mom was diagnosed with appendix cancer about five years ago, so I can relate to hospital visits (Granted, I…[Read more]

Okay guys, I’m finished! I tried my best, but I’m still not sure if the end brought out the beauty of the hands enough. I put it at the end of the doc (it starts on page four), so please go ahead and edit and suggest away! I tried to keep a lot of the original in it, but I might have missed some good sections, so feel free to add them back in.…[Read more]

This is a good point. Inside the burning house probably wouldn’t be the best place to write the reminiscing scene. @j-a-penrose @everyone_else What do you guys think?

And if you agree, how should the MC and grandmother get out? Should we use an older MC who’s able to carry the grandmother out? Should a firefighter intervene? Any other…[Read more]