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Adnyole replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey, Kinda late to the party but I got some comments from the peanut gallery. I think a lot of what Christians can consume comes down to their personal freedom and their personal weaknesses. Each person needs to discern with their people and God, what they can and can’t handle. Some read LOTR, some can’t, some read Harry Potter, some adamantly…[Read more]
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Adnyole started the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey, so I am working on an outline for a story about an African teen named Ambrose whose fictional tribe was basically anialated by rebels, and he gets caught on the edge of an explosion that scars his face which leads him to Medical personal Yona and his Irish wife Lydia “Bibi Miti”. After a series of events Ambrose, Yona and Lydia enter this…[Read more]
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Adnyole started the topic HELPPlot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey, so I am working on an outline for a story about an African teen named Ambrose whose fictional tribe was basically anialated by rebels, and he gets caught on the edge of an explosion that scars his face which leads him to
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
XD lol yeah…it might take longer, but it’ll still kill them. *smirks at Alessio*
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Adnyole joined the group Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Alrighty! Don’t be scared to just post something completely unexpected with no warning, it’ll be fun! *for everyone but our characters 😋*
OooOoooh 0.0
What about…if someone who is literally fireproof touches it…? *side-eyes Alessio who instantly pretends he hasn’t been eavesdropping this whole time while considering touching that sword…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Lol you’re good. I think…maybe a mix of two and three.
Fun Fact: Miles’ sword was forged by ***** (I have no idea what yet) but basically it was forged long ago for the King Gabor. After Gabor died, his wife took up the sword and escaped to Parvus. Years later, Miles comes along, takes up the same sword, and begins a war o…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hi again!
Does anyone also know if there could be a pain-killer strong enough to ease physical wounds in pill-form?
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For severe pain: opiates ie. morphine, codeine, oxycodone, hydromorphone etc. Or plain old opium if going for a more old school/medieval type approach to medicine. Mild pain: Asprin, Ibuprophen. Asprin is a derivative from certain trees, people used cocaine leaves in the past. How severe is “your pain” and what medicinal method would you like to use?
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My protagonist is experiencing severe pain as his body slowly adjusts to a power he receives where he can control the atoms in his body/objects he touches, mostly just turning things into dust, or in the case of his body, being able to control its density, enabling him to pass through objects and turn parts of himself into dust and back to…[Read more]
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I don’t see why not. He could use even fentanyl if he had to (it is used in medicine sometimes). Analgesics (pain meds) basically block the pain signals in the brain or nervous system. There are tons of pain meds so that seems perfectly fine to me. Just, uh, watch your guy for physical dependence and addiction cause a fellow with that much…[Read more]
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Awesome!
Yeah, he wouldn’t get addicted to the drugs, it was given to him once so he would be able to function as he’s being rescued.
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Sure thing!
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey everyone!
I was wondering if any of you would know the effects it would have on the body to have electrocution as a form of torture for a few days?
If a person had their arms chained so they were forced to stand for about 24-12 hours as well, what would happen to the body then?
Could a person lose limbs in a fire?
Also, My protagonist’s…[Read more]
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Hi, I happen to be some studying burns in school, I am also a bit of a nerd and would love to give you a hand. First, a person can lose a limb due to fire, but most likely as the result of an amputation from burn complications such as infection, or compartment syndrome (essential circulation is cut off from the limb because the burn circles the…[Read more]
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Oh, and to the other questions, electrocution effects are going to depend entirely on the voltage, current, and amperage of electricity in use. It is also going to depend on the duration of direct electrical exposure. It is definitely going to affect the electrical conduction of the heart and muscles, likely causing injury over time. It is…[Read more]
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much again! I’m not that medically inclined, and often don’t know where to start researching these topics!
The nature of the fire that injured him is a great point, I really should’ve looked into that more than just him neglecting something in his house when in an argument.
My story is set in a futuristic world, they have a chemical…[Read more]
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Hey, no worries. So research can be as simple as google and youtube and as complex as a peer-reviewed article from a publication journal. the trick is just making sure you’ve got reliability so always look for information provided by universities, or professionals and just check those resources against each other for discrepancies. There’s lots of…[Read more]
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Gee, your character is gonna need some serious therapy for all that trauma and PTSD. 🙂
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Thank you so much!!!
Yeah… this character is really messed up… I love writing him, and I am giving him a happy ending (as happy as it could end) but still… he’s not ok 😬. He really needs a therapist.
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@…everyone *grins*
Hello, I’m here! Did someone tag me?! *looks around empty room* Oops, might be a little late to the party lol. Anywho, great to see the debate thread open again. Apologies for my lateness. My characters had me…erm, detained for awhile XD.
I won’t try to catch up with all the debates, but rather, go back to the most…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh goodness! I’m sorry @ethan-leonard my little brother keeps bantering Character Castle ideas irl which means I gotta post these ideas first so you can have a say XDDDDDDDD
Ok, we were chatting mostly about the first group but for group 2 with Miles and everybody, do you want to:
1) continue through the trial of anger and vengeance and have…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Accept your fear and cowardice!
One million ways to break a human being, and all the pieces just never die. It’s amazing how much people can take and not die however much they wish they could. Something about staying alive is so human, no matter how much you hate life you’re just a little too scared to leave it…
Can’t feel don’t feel he can’t…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Clack.
Wood chips and flies.
Clack.
Sweat trickles down the nose.
Clack.
Hands are numb from hundreds of strokes.
Clack.
The remaining wood breaks and the limb falls. Caleb paused to catch his breath. The tree was almost delimbed now. Just a few more to go. Then he had to clean five more. Alex would collect the limbs for their fire.…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I think I will be adding a new character
Caleb Leckie
age: 19
occupation: land development
personality: cheerful, dedicated, laconic.
Description: 5’11, short brown hair, stubble of a beard, decent build, redneck suntan, jeans and untucked shirt.
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Simply put, Sherlock was not having a great day. After completing the trial, the detective stumbled out into a…house??? It was empty, showing signs of being burnt. It was…home??????? Sherlock started to wonder if he was going insane. This place was overrun and destroyed ages ago. It was destroyed by rebirths, creatures of darkness, after…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
LOL, this is especially funny to me coz Ehud named it “Lord Castle” the first time he was in the Character Castle so like they both love randomly nicknaming 😂👌
Ehud didn’t stop crying until a warm hand squeezed his shoulder. He just wanted to be held, or belong. And boys weren’t supposed to cry everybody made fun of him for being a cry…[Read more]
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Winter Rose replied to the topic What if these characters met? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys! This was super cool to be a part of but life is pretty crazy right now. I haven’t been/ won’t be very active on here. I’m really sorry to leave. I hope you guys are able to continue on!
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
“I am King Miles Regulus of the Kingdom of Pietas.” He replied. “I have no idea how I got here, I was in the middle of attacking the city of Arx Gravicus when…I found myself here.
“So tell me, how do we attack this thing that is forcing us to do stuff?” Miles said, a grin spreading on his face.
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
The newcomer assessed him without even trying to hide it. Fair enough, weren’t they all doing the same?
“Who are you?” He asked and before Nathair could answer kept on. “What is this place? And what monstrosity?”
The stranger had such an earnest, inquisitive gaze. Strange world; some of these people actually seem sincere and that’s a rarity.
Na…[Read more]
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