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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
The antagonist.
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
He grabbed the knife by his its blade!
Alessio leapt back, breathing heavily as the knife vanished in Arsene’s hand, disintegrated almost instantly. All the color drained from his face as he imagined what could happen if Arsene used his powers on him.
“Wow, nice acting skills, ten points. You can act out your drama play, when I’m sure nobod…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
@jared-williams CONGRATULATIONS on finishing it!!!!!!
I won’t be able to help you out; I’m sorry. Thanks for thinking of me, though.
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Sherlock discovered how hard he could hit the brakes, coming to a stop. The idiot, who was in the road, took what looked like a cane/sword (Sherlock didn’t know which) and tapped the car hood. He scratched the back of his head, as he marveled at the “borrowed” car.
Ugh, I’m becoming more like Arsene, Sherlock thought. “You’re blocking the road!”…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
so to summarize in simplistic fashion, curses derive their power from satan, while blessings derive their power from God…
Who uses the curses?
Who has the power to bless and how do they get it? (does God give that power to them? why?)
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Kaytlin Phillips joined the group Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
it’s not meant to be ambivalent or ambiguous, it’s just that they are not known to the protagonist and thus aren’t delved into. The lore is complicated and would take a long time to explain while at the same time would not have anything to do with the novel I wrote, so to summarize in simplistic fashion, curses derive their power from satan,…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
and an intriguing way of separating it.
It is hard to make what I was saying clear in regard to the difference between fantasy and magic/supernatural. Perhaps this short guest blog post I wrote for Joelle (whom you know) will help make my beliefs clearer:…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
no real deadline. I’d like to start putting feelers out for traditional publishers this summer… but I have no set date or anything.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
That is an interesting question and an intriguing way of separating it.
Okay. So, essence is more of an ability that the people of the world have. So in my mind it’s not treated like supernatural or magic. It’s far from witchery and it is not seen as breaking the of the rules of nature. However, it actually touches upon racism because each race…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
That’s an interesting plot, Jared!
However, I do not read books with protagonist-related supernatural content (biblical reasons). Does your book contain supernatural/magical elements? (I do not consider fantasy abilities magic/supernatural unless they are called magic/supernatural or treated as such)
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Except for the that magic mirror! 😄 But he wouldn’t remember that…😢
Yeah, glass cuts are not fun, poor baby…!!!
Shoot, I hope somebody teaches him how to pick glass out of his feet…
Not as a voice of reason lol, but definitely each in their own way! They all are hyper-skilled in their own thing, and could be twice as grand working…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Welcome to the Character Castle! This is where you can bring your characters to meet one another (role-play), and perhaps even discover new things about them and their arcs.
A few guidelines:
1. No character may leave the boundaries of the castle, but you can invent any room (library, indoor garden, kitchen, etc.) as it pertains to…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>AHH YES I’D LOVE TO READ THIS SO MUCH!!!!! Unfortunately, I am over-committing myself at the moment and am not sure if I’ll have time. Is there a deadline to sign up?</p>
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
“Yeah… I wouldn’t eat those.” K’Nika replied.
Kallun nodded.
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
“Julian’s poisoned us with berries before, so I don’t trust his judgement,” Lacey said.
“Just tell the entire world, would you, Lace?” Julian rolled his eyes.
“Maybe next time,” Ellie said kind of laughing at her friends.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
😄
Thanks.
AND HE REALLY DOESN’T. HE’S NEVER SEEN GLASS BEFORE. He didn’t know! And now his feet- Ayyyyy. My boy…Though… you all’s characters are pretty smart, in their own ways, too…
I really like your new tagline!
I’ve been thinking about changing mine… *strokes chin thoughtfully* -
Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
I know it’s fantasy, so I understand if it’s not your cup-o-tea, but this is also my first attempt at a romance novel… so I would love to hear your thoughts on it, if you are willing.
https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aefflaeds-weakness.html
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Aefflaed’s Weakness: A Love Story
This touching story began a…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams joined the group Romance Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
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Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago

https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aefflaeds-weakness.html
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Aefflaed’s Weakness: A Love Story
This touching story began as a short story and quickly evolved into an epic. (well, a short novel, but still an epic story….if I can toot my own horn a bit. )
In my previous WIP, The Adventures of the Last Aygiff,…[Read more]
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