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Martin Detwiler started the topic New Member! in the forum Announcements 6 years, 12 months ago
@trallion has joined Erekdale! Please make him welcome with all your best horror stories about the extreme rigors of Guild life here in Erekdale under your terrible taskmaster Karthmin.
For you, good sir, I have a few resources:
^This is probably the first thing to really check…[Read more]
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Martin Detwiler started the topic Week 15: Writing Life; Make Writing Great Again (Brandon Miller) in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion 6 years, 12 months ago
My dear Ereki!
I completely dropped the ball this week, and I do apologize for that. Weird work schedule, falling prey to a cold, and etc….
But nothing that couldn’t have been overcome. I simply and plainly forgot to post this on Monday. ๐
So as not to fall behind, I’m going to post this discussion piece today anyway. I hope there’s some…[Read more]
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K.M. Small replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years ago
@devastate-lasting I would love to look over it again, but I don’t think I’ll have time ๐ So sorry!
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E. Grace replied to the topic June 2019 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years ago
@sageinthemeadow That’s good! Hope your goals will work out even better this week. ๐
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@hope-ann @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @enu @the-inkspiller @filewriter @princess-foo @catwing @kelly-lundgren @allison-grace @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000 @warrenluther04 @lydia-writes @seekjustice @ro…[Read more]
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Princess Foo started the topic Prompt War: Beauty in the Ordinary in the forum Announcements 7 years ago
It’s that time of the month again! Where we gather together and raise our pens in determination! To battle! This month’s prompt is “Write a story where you bring out the beauty of something ordinary in the middle of a very dramatic setting” which… wow. That sounds tough.
Here is the brainstorm doc. We can also brainstorm in the chat.
This…[Read more]
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Martin Detwiler replied to the topic Weekly Wonderings in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@catwing @hope-ann @allison-grace @emgc @enu @princess-foo @seekjustice @karthmin @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @the-inkspiller @filewriter @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000 @warrenluther04 @lydia-writes @rose-noblescroll @thetessinator @briannajean @norella-novik @morreafirebird @sageinthemeadow @kelly-lundgren
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E. Grace replied to the topic June 2019 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years ago
@karthmin Speaking of vacation, I was actually just in Ohio! (I noticed on your profile that’s where you live. ๐ ) I’m glad you had a good vacation as well!
@kelly-lundgren @karthmin @sageinthemeadow @devastate-lasting @ajaj2000
Hello, all!ย How are your goals going so far this week?ย I think mine are going pretty well… I finished the b…[Read more]
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Martin Detwiler started the topic Week 14: Writing Life; Self vs. Traditional Publishing (Daeus, Jane, Faith) in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion 7 years ago
Hello Ereki!
Sorry for the lateness. But here is this week’s discussion piece! Without further ado:
Self Publishing vs Traditional Publishing
I think itโs safe to say that most writers have a โone dayโ dream of getting published: having your book on the shelves of total strangers and sharing your story with the world.
But thereโs always…[Read more]
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E. Grace started the topic June 2019 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years ago
All right, after a well-enjoyed vacation, I’m back and ready to get back into things here! THANK YOU, @seekjustice, for covering for me while I was gone!ย I hope all of your goals went well last week. ๐
What are your goals for this new week in the already-not-so-new month of June?
Let’s see…
— Get ready for cousins’ visit
— Finish the…[Read more]
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K.M. Small started the topic A Confusing Post to Eliminate Confusion in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years ago
Hey Ereki! I’m making some changes with my pen name and wanted to have a quick post to eliminate any confusion.
I’ll keep this short: I’m changing my pen name. Or more accurately, getting rid of it, since I’ve run into a lot of confusion in the past regarding my pen name versus my given name, especially at writers conferences and while marketing…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic May Word War! in the forum Announcements 7 years ago
@princess-foo *nods* Yeah, I should’ve tried to do more write-ins, but I was graduating too. Yay! ๐
Maybe if we keep trying we’ll be able to get more people to do it. I hope so at least. I’ll try to do more than just one next time. ๐
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The Word War results are in!
New Wessex: 17,592
Knaphollow: 10,183
Erekdale: 9,481
Rillumen: 6,887
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WarrenLuther04 started the topic June 2019 Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years ago
wOw. I’ve … been gone for awhile. *ponders in a corner*
But I’m back! Hi! *waves excitedly*
So for my June critique piece, I’d like to present the third chapter of my WIP. *throws confetti*
Please critique for:
– Show Don’t Tell: It’s hard for me.
– Interesting-ness: Does it intrigue you and pull you into the story more?…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic May 2019 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years ago
A pillow stuffed with feathers…wait…
@morreafirebird @devastate-lasting
How are all your goals going this week?
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years ago
@devastate-lasting sorry for the delay, but I just finished going over your story again. It definitely improved a lot more from the first time — great job! It really helped to have the stakes more clearly established in the beginning, too. Just let me know if you have any questions on my comments in the doc ๐
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Catwing replied to the topic May Word War! in the forum Announcements 7 years ago
Has everyone turned in their word counts? If you haven’t yet, now would be a good time. ๐
Also how do you think I’m doing as the Word Master. Is there something I could improve on?
@hope-ann @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @enu @the-inkspiller @filewriter @princess-foo @emgc @karthmin @ke…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic May Word War! in the forum Announcements 7 years ago
*unvanishes* Kree! The word war ended yesterday! So be sure to turn in your word counts!
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Here’s the form.
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@hope-ann @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @enu @the-inkspiller @filewriter @princess-foo @emgc @karthmin @kelly-lundgren @allison-grace @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000
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SeekJustice replied to the topic May 2019 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years ago
@hope-ann@mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow@enu @the-inkspiller@filewriter @princess-foo@catwing @kelly-lundgren@allison-grace @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000@warrenluther04 @lydia-writes @seekjustice @rose-noblescroll @thetessinator@briannajean @norella-novik @morreafirebird@karthmin
Hello…[Read more]
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Martin Detwiler started the topic Week 13: Writing Life; Typing vs. Writing (Me) in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion 7 years ago
I’m still on vacation, so this is short.
Yes.
I wrote a short article. 😂
Typing vs. Writing by hand
Things I’ve learned from my own experience with both mediums:
Typing:
Pros:
Typing is faster.
Typing is much easier to edit and clean your prose as you go along.
Cons:
I find myself easily slipping into editor mindset, and making new…[Read more]
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years ago
@devastate-lasting absolutely! I can definitely look over it again if you’d like. And if you have any questions on character arcs, I’d be happy to answer them. They’re one of my favorite parts of storytelling ๐
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years ago
Alright, I just finished going over your story! It was quite an emotional rollercoaster — in a very good way. Most of my comments are in the document, but my additional thoughts are below:
– Try to emphasize conflict and goals more. The first half of the story, I was confused as to what Steven was trying to do and what was…[Read more]
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