@dakota
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@candide Welcome to thread and thanks for posting! 🙂
Hmm . . . *reads over poem again* I like the emotion of the poem and the language used in it. It just seems that the poem is a bit short. There’s not enough there to support it’s purpose.
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Dakota replied to the topic The Prince Thief Roleplay Planning Thread in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 8 months ago
Yes, those are good points! We need a naming committee! 🙂 (sorta kidding) I agree that the biosphere is rather warm and dry, kinda like the eastern side of the Rocky Mountains (Colorado, Wyoming, etc.).
I like the festival idea too, but I just had a thought . . . if, as @jessi-rae suggested, the prince was the thief and ar…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic [ROLE PLAY] The Prince Thief in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 8 months ago
Sorry my last post is sooo weird! I typed it on my Mom’s phone and I am not good with phones!!
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Dakota replied to the topic The Prince Thief Roleplay Planning Thread in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 8 months ago
@ellen-blanc It’s okay if Ignis moves on. Megyn will survive! 🙂 And the more people we can get in here, the better for the roleplay.
Through introduction of our characters into the story, we’ve created a pretty clear setting as far as place (description of the mansion, the atmosphere, etc.) . But our characters haven’t found out what is really…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic [ROLE PLAY] The Prince Thief in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years, 8 months ago
@e-b-raulands “Here as in this dimension or as in at this party?” Ignis asked. “Did you two come togeth–” Amber began, then stood stock still with a shock and confusion settling over her face. She stared at Ignis for a few mo…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Word War…How's it going? in the forum Announcements 6 years, 8 months ago
@selah-chelyah *smiles sheepishly* I have 824 words. I am going to submit them now. @theinconceivable1 It’s sad but okay if you decide to leave. Hope to see you lingering in the corners! 👋🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@andrew That’s okay! 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Ha Ha!! Fine! : )
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Dakota posted a new activity comment 6 years, 8 months ago
@edmund-lloyd-fletcher Ok, I have posted my notes in the Google Doc at the above link. Hope you have a nice day!
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Thank you Dakota. I have been doing the edits I ended up having to do a bit more rewrite than I thought but the book is looking so much better. Thank you.
Would you be interested in having the next section? I will give both parts so you can see what changed if you want to and The next section.
Thanks again for all the help you have given me so far.
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Dakota replied to the topic Hi guys! *waves* i'm still alive in the forum Announcements 6 years, 8 months ago
@katthewriter Good to see you! : ) How have you been?
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Well, guys, I don’t have one prepared for this week, so how about you guys take a turn and post lyrical…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Music And Writing…Are You Musical? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@holly-anne Yeah, I like all of the songs I’ve heard from it, especially “Father”.
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Dakota replied to the topic Newest But Eventually Older Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@w-o-holmes Yes, I love the vividness of the style! Good work.
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Dakota replied to the topic Word war #6 in the forum Word Wars 6 years, 8 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer You’re welcome! : )
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Dakota replied to the topic Word war #6 in the forum Word Wars 6 years, 8 months ago
@jane-maree Here is a Meerkat! I’m ready to write! 🙂 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer Pssst!
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Dakota replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer *Megyn finishes with Abner’s wound and walks out with him. After a few minutes reenters and returns to her seat*
ME: Is he alright?
Megyn: *Sighs* “I think so . . . it is only a flesh wound and it didn’t bleed too much. It’s just . . . ”
ME: I know, I know. . . . We should catch up on the questions.
Alan: *…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Music And Writing…Are You Musical? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@w-o-holmes I like some songs from both of those artists. I think my favorite TobyMac song is “Lose My Soul”. Newsboys . . . depends on if it’s with or without Peter Furler. With him, it’s probably “Thrive”. With Micheal Tait, it’s probably “Guilty”.
I don’t know . . . probably Jeremy Camp. . . I guess For King and Country too.
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Dakota replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Megyn glances at Hector, smiles faintly and softly asks him for some cloth for bandaging. Lays her head against Abner’s arm and whispers “I’m sorry.”.
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Dakota replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Megyn kneels by his chair, and, gripping the handle of the dagger with one hand and spreading the fingers of the other hand around the wound, pulls out the blade (putting in a considerable amount of effort). Drops the weapon to the floor and presses both hands around the wound.
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