Daeus Lamb

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Ah, cool. I was going to say that shouldn’t advertise The Golden Ziggurat to all fantasy readers, but more to people who enjoy Aztec culture and similar, because I’m an avid fantasy reader and I wasn’t a fan of The Golden Ziggurat. (Though if it’s been edited further I might like it better now; we’ll see. Part of what threw me off was…[Read more]

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By the fantasy story you mean The Golden Ziggurat? (Just to clarify, ’cause if so I have some feedback. :P)

@daeus-lamb she was suggested by a fellow author friend of mine. We met at a coffee shop and got to talk for a while, and she told me how she became an editor and what she valued as a fellow writer. I could tell she would be honest with me and also focus on my problem areas based on that conversation.

Guess what, everyone? It’s time for RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC II: LEGEND OF THE FORBIDDEN BURIAL GROUNDS PART 3!!!

Enjoy the laughter! *evil grin*

For those of you who have missed portions of this saga, you can click here for the first installment and here for the second.

@jessi-rae @daeus-lamb @j-a-penrose @supermonkey42 @karthmin @savannahgrace…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb

(For once, I think I’m in time in responding to you :P)

Looking at the webpage link you supplied above, and specifically the book cover, I’m thinking of an Indiana Jones adventure… or maybe (to eliminate the cultural reference 🙂 – historical or modern archeological-related adventure, with some mystery related to some ancient…[Read more]

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A basic premise could be that the reader walks with a woman when they see two soldiers dying at the edge of a battlefield. The reader’s powers are alluded to and he appears to be a supernatural being when he can perceive the two soldier’s dying thoughts and their pasts regarding a woman they loved. The reader hesitates, then…[Read more]

@piperbee I think the beauty of second person is that although we are talking to the reader, we can make them into whoever we want them to be for the story’s purpose. i.e. “After your mom died, you found yourself taking up her sword and hunting orcs in the forests that bordered your family’s lands.”

I kind of found a better understanding from…[Read more]

@the-fledgling-artist I’m glad you enjoyed the episode! Huh, that’s an interesting question. 🙂  I can’t think of any answers but I admit I’m curious to see what others would say. Any thoughts @josiah, @daeus-lamb? (And anyone else but this seems kinda up your alley. :P)

@daeus-lamb, that’s not what I had in mind but that would be really cool I think. 😀

@daeus-lamb

Wow, that’s exciting!

@daeus-lamb

Hey, cool! It looks great! The only thing I would suggest would be maybe, “he realizes he’s in this over his head”.

Are you publishing it?

@daeus-lamb

I appreciate this article, as yet another needed reminder to be disciplined as a writer, and to set and keep goals for myself in that regard. But when I actually put this into practice I’ll let you know.  Been distracted recently and haven’t gotten as much writing done as I want to.

@daeus-lamb Not until now. It could be a good idea, but I can’t look at Facebook, cause I don’t have it, and I’d rather read open articles, or get advice from people I know, like you guys. Good idea though… I’ll think about it.

(BTW, I love your signature)

@daeus-lamb That might work. 🙄😂

Ooh, hey, this is helpful. Thanks, @catwing

1. How many people does she want to effect with her suicide? If she wants to effect a good number of people she could schedule it during something big where they will see it.

She’s basically trying to show her youth group what happens if no one cares about each other. Because that is what her youth…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb Thanks!! This list will be a huge help. I think my story includes elements of the time bomb, the big problem, and maybe relationships. 🙂

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I really appreciate this post, I haven’t gotten any writing done this week at all. 🙁  Time keeps slipping away from me as I work on my other responsibilities. Perhaps I just need to accept that I’m never going to get everything done, and just start working on writing after I finish my devotions in the morning. I definitely need to…[Read more]

Lo and behold, it’s RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC II: LEGEND OF THE FORBIDDEN BURIAL GROUNDS PART 2!

Enjoy, everyone! 😊 For those of you who missed the first installment, go to page one of this topic. 😉

@jessi-rae @daeus-lamb @j-a-penrose @supermonkey42 @karthmin @savannahgrace @maddiejay @catwing @brandon-miller @josiah @anne-of-lothlorien @wordsmith…[Read more]