Livi Ryddle

@anne_the_noob14 This is a fun story! Everything about it reminds me of how I used to write when I was  9–11 (except my characters were all animals xD).

The main thing I think could be improved is the character descriptions. When you write out a longer paragraph describing all the physical attributes of a character, it slows the pace of the…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 My current WIP is an allegory actually. I’ve been experimenting with short stories since I canned my latest in a long line of book ideas, none of which took off (due to my lack of self discipline). I’ve started so much stuff that I never finished, I just wanted to finish something already! So I just finished my first short story,…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 Yay! I’m glad you like it! (:

And I would probably write more about Jane but… word limits. 😛

xD

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Heh. If I married one of my characters I’d marry either Sharv or Kieron. But… since Kieron’s kinda taken… twice…(it’s a long story) I’d marry Sharv.

I’m glad you think so! 😀 I’m actually writing 2 books with Kari in them right now. Katonia and Parthonia.

In Katonia, Kari is 19(which I might change back down to 18) and…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

Nope! I’m later in November. So same month though.

Well, if I ever had a crush I didn’t know what it was and still don’t. XD If I could pick who I married though I’d pick one of my characters. XD

Ha! Yeah. I’m… rather mean to my characters. They have horribly painful lives, physically, mentally, and emotionally.

Agh! Don’t…[Read more]

@theinconceivable1 You know what?  I just started typing your signature as “theinconvenience” didnt realize what I was doing XD!

Why, yes *crosses arms and raises eyebrow* I DO know your real name, dont I? *laughs with power*

Well, its interesting to know what other people wear all the time.  Why do you not like skirts?  Maybe if you were bo…[Read more]

@steward-of-the-pen *gapes*

Girl, you got some brainstorming talent!!! I absolutely LOVE this story idea!! We HAVE to do it!! *tosses own ideas out the window of tower where Steward’s princess is trapped–or so it seems* *wait does that make me the princess* Charlie the horse is also the best name for a character such as you have just described!!…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14

Hi! I’m glad we amused you. ☺

*stares at your forum signature* *jaw drops* Wow. I think you and @theinconceivable1 are going to be friends! XD

Yeah, I get what you mean. I used to always want to hang out with the boys when I was younger cuz they did the cool stuff. Like playing Star Wars, while the girls talked about, I dunno,…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 @j-a-penrose Yes! I am ALL for the idea of it being from the perspective of the prince’s sarcastic horse. Oooh, how about something  like this?

1. Prince and horse are best friends.
2. Prince decides to rescue princess.
3. Prince falls in love with princess and ignores horse. Horse is jealous. (And he’s also bemoaning the fact th…

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I just can’t escape the descent of fairytales that has hit us. XD @julia ( I can’t get your tag to work, so I’m going to put it in a gazillion times. As long as one works.)@julia
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Okay okay. Julia I get what you’re saying there, but we’d need to make sure that the ending is happy, not clichéd, sticking to the fai…[Read more]

Well thank you so much to

@anne_the_noob14
@chalice
@ashira
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And toeveryone else in case I missed anyone 😄

It was very nice to meet all of you! Thank you for welcoming me to Story Embers! 😁

@anne_the_noob14 That he calls his dad “sir” as basic address caught my attention. The name “Johnson” is odd to me, since it’s usually a last name (son-of-John). But between that and the sack of coins I’m guessing this isn’t modern day =P You mentioned fanfiction. Is this, like, Pirates of the Caribbean fanfic? “Black Hugh” sounds piratey. I’d…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14 I think it’s a good start! Right off I’m curious about why Johnson’s mom is sick, why Johnson has to leave without his dad knowing, and why everything is so secretive in general. 😛 It does seem a little sudden, though, with the story jumping right into the action.

Here is one of Jess’s lessons about plotting that I found…[Read more]

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@anne_the_noob14 Ooh that would be sooo cool! Oh I might participate in that! 😁 Yeah…I guess I’ll just have to wait for some other time to see some of your art 😉