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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This weeks is one of my oldest ones. I wrote is on a day I had a ”emotional breakdown” way back when was abou…[Read more]
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Warden replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
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Warden replied to the topic Chloe and Zoe in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@andrew, oh good. I probably shouldn’t have asked that, though. Now I went and spoiled the story. Whoops!
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Warden replied to the topic Chloe and Zoe in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@andrew, Is Erik dead?
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Chloe and Zoe in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
I really liked it! One thing, though. I wouldn’t name the animals as much. It’s from Chloe’s POV, right? Well, she’s running for her life, she won’t be specifically noticing which animals are which. If she were actually in a zoo, then she probably would be, but not while running for her life.
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Warden replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@bookcrazygirl @kari-karast @andrew
Aleck ran into the treasure room with the guards hot on his heels. Aleck dove behind some treasure, and the guards rushed past without seeing him. He quickly and quietly slipped the rubies out of the scarf to Ash. “Get them out of here. They won’t suspect you have them,” he whispered, glad no one had seen.…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 @andrew @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Thanks guys! 🙂
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
Karim grinned, headache receding a bit. Deathrock thought he could out-talk Karim? Well, Deathrock would have to think again. “Actually, I was planning for my last words to be along the lines of ‘I left the gold stash in-‘ and then I die.” He smirked.
(Hey @andrew are there, by any chance, swords or other weapons in the treasure room?)
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is one I wrote the other day, while reading a very eye-opening book on evangelism. I hope the Great Commissi…[Read more]
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Throne Warden of Emberia replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@kari-karast I’m glad you like it!
@andrew I really want compose music for them and sell them as songs. But learning to compose is coming slowly . . . I might do a poem book for the less lyrical ones.
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Throne Warden of Emberia replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
Aleck dove for the scarf and wrapped the rubies in it as many times as the scarf would allow.
“Come on, Spadewick,”
The dragon took a hesitating step toward aleck, but he was still unsure.
A soldier ran through the darkness towards him, and Aleck tried to use the power of the rubies on him. He couldn’t get it to work. Aleck shrugged, stuck the…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is one I wrote a while ago. I haven’t revised it in a while, so if anyone see anything that could be improved, feel free to comment!…[Read more]
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Joseph Brink replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@kari-karast, apparently it wasn’t a trap, or my character would be dead right now. Unless its a different kind of trap.
@andrew, sorry, but I forgot to make my character be tormented much by the darkness. Aleck just isn’t the type to be scared of that.
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@andrew Yep! Makes sense! *cackles evilly*
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Karim whipped his head around so he was staring at what he thought was Julius’ vague outline. “A prophecy?” That didn’t make sense. It was impossible for him to be in a prophecy, wasn’t it?
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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Tormented in the darkness? Does that mean the dark can show illusions?
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Joseph Brink replied to the topic Game of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@bookcrazygirl @andrew @kari-karast @e_elaine_soup5 @shadowwriter161
Aleck couldn’t resist questioning Julius further. “But if you don’t live here, then how do you usually know? Do you have some connection with Deathrock, because we could really use that, I think.”
“Oh, and everyone, meet Spadewick the dragon. He’s harmless.” Aleck looked at…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@andrew Your welcome! Yeah, I like writing poems. 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@parker @evelyn @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one was inspired by a line of another song. It just jumped out at me, so I scribbled it down in my notebook. Later, when I read over the…[Read more]
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