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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
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This weeks is one of my oldest ones. I wrote is on a day I had a ”emotional breakdown” way back when was about 11. It a little revised since I wrote it, but I still like it for it’s simplicity. ( I did compose a tune to this one, if you can call what I do ”composing”.)
As usual, critique and enjoy!
Be Still
Be still and know
The Lord is God
He’ll guide us with His rod
Be still and knowBe still and know
His Father love
His voice like a gentle dove
Be still and knowBe still and know
He is our friend
He’ll keep us ’til the end
Be still and knowBe still and know
He’ll bring us home
And no more will we roam
Be still and knowBe exalted
Victorious
Be exalted in us
Here in our heartsBe still and know










