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  • Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago

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    This weeks is one of my oldest ones. I wrote is on a day I had a ”emotional breakdown” way back when was about 11. It a little revised since I wrote it, but I still like it for it’s simplicity. ( I did compose a tune to this one, if you can call what I do ”composing”.)

    As usual, critique and enjoy!

    Be Still

    Be still and know
    The Lord is God
    He’ll guide us with His rod
    Be still and know

    Be still and know
    His Father love
    His voice like a gentle dove
    Be still and know

    Be still and know
    He is our friend
    He’ll keep us ’til the end
    Be still and know

    Be still and know
    He’ll bring us home
    And no more will we roam
    Be still and know

    Be exalted
    Victorious
    Be exalted in us
    Here in our hearts

    Be still and know

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