Brooke

Shaking her head, Nora answered, “No! I mean, they were always slightly pointed, even when I was little, but I thought that was because my ancestors were elves.”

Lagoron frowned. This was unexpected. Was it normal? What even was going on? As far as he knew, he’d always had pointed ears – Larawen too, and she even had a Man’s blood flowing thro…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

@jasmine

Mine creative juices are flowing again!

(Note: Don’t hate me, but I’m just gonna pretend that Nora never got out of the brace. I feel like I pushed her out of it too fast, and it’s a good plot point, so… yeah. Sorry Nora.)

<b>Nora:</b> *crosses arms* *glares*…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

Yes, the water does contrast (I’m using my contrasting backwards XD) The well is actually shown in the picture prompt, and the water is this rich turquoise, so it stood out. What I could do is to perhaps use the fresh water to lead to thoughts longing for his once beautiful world . . .

That’s a brilliant idea! *Hurriedly looks up…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby of course!  I’m glad I could help 🙂

@wingiby-iggiby

WINGIBY!! I missed you so much!! *Bowls you over with a massive hug*

OooOh, I love that story! It’s creepy and hopeful at the same time! I love the concept, and Isaac seems like an interesting character!

Okay, here are a few things I’d change. I’m mostly focusing on paragraph-level.

I rested my feet on the pedals and coasted…

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@wingiby-iggiby I would be up for that!

I definitely agree with showing more of Isaac’s thoughts.  I think that it would help me to connect with him as a person, and also could help reveal some background, such as why he’s forced to “doll” people for the carpenter.

One of the things that I noticed was that you have a lot of description, which…[Read more]

Ok, so I had a idea of how the battle scene might start.

What if Ian was helping one of the shape shifters that got hurt in the earlier battle, but didn’t know it was a shape shifter? Then the shape shifter comes back from gathering wood or something and recognizes the group and calls for…[Read more]

@jasmine

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

I’m gonna be gone until next Thursday, so I may or may not post.

~Kylie

@wingiby-iggiby

@crazywriter

@backwardslivewriter

@mischievous-thwapling

@arindown

@joelle-stone

Hi y’all! I’m going to be on a trip for the next seven days, so I may or may not post.

~Kylie

@rebekah12

Ahh!!!!!!!!!! Another TGE fan!

*ahem*

Sorry, but I really love The Green Ember series. A lot. And I love the characters a lot too (except Morbin *hisssss*). *thinks about Helmer* *sobs* And I haven’t read the books with Fleck Blackstar or Massie Burnson, or the ones focusing on Jo yet, but I plan to!

And I think a Macha attack w…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

@rebekah12

@melancholic-writer

@winter_rose

*Creeps into room* *sits down on beanbag* *a cloud of dust billows up* *coughs* *stares at abandoned room covered in dusty pages* *walks over and leaves a note on the table*

Friends,

When you get back from… Wherever you are (I myself have been adventuring in Natalia recently),…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

@crazywriter

@backwardslivewriter

@mischievous-thwapling

@arindown

@joelle-stone

So…

~Kylie

@jasmine

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

…

~Kylie

I totally agree!

SHAPESHIFTERS!!!!!

@wingiby-iggiby

@mischievous-thwapling

XD😂

Shape shifters work, where they  originally working for the main villain?

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

@kylie-wingfeather

Battle scene? Everyone seems to post a lot during those.

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

@kylie-wingfeather

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

@jasmine

So… Any ideas to get the ball rolling again?

~Kylie

@wingiby-iggiby

@crazywriter

@backwardslivewriter

@mischievous-thwapling

@arindown

Come hither!

@joelle-stone

Are there any ideas you would like me to use with Arundelle?

@wingiby-iggiby

You still here?

@rebekah12

@melancholic-writer

@winter-rose

Aha! My creative juice fountain is flowing again! I have material!

Amberley’s PoV

I stared curiously at the three new girls. The first one, Mercedes, was about fifteen, with long golden-blonde hair, and deep blue eyes. Gabi was was about eighteen, with auburn hair,…[Read more]

I vote bringing it back–the deep, dark hole of lost forums is the the stuff of nightmares. (or, in my case, the cause of queasy stomachs)

@mischievous-thwapling

@wingiby-iggiby

P.S. If Oreo isn’t going to rejoin us (alas!), who is going to take the reins of Jason? (Don’t say that we just take him out of the story and pretend he never…[Read more]