Brooke

Thank you! I’ve got countries for them, drats! It’s ok though, I can modify. No worries 😉

lonathecat

Oh man, I’ve been doing your tag all wrong! *face-palms, head-bang-on-desk, pulls hair 😛 * I think I am the only person on this forum who keeps getting tags wrong at least once every time I post something!

@lona-the-cat

*”You got it!!!” Dances absurd little jig*

For Christians, death certainly shouldn’t be horrifying. So you hit the nail on the head for that one. 😉

Ohh…. (I’m ohh-ing about your explanation for their world and how it makes sense now 😛 ) ….

Thank you so much! That means a lot!

You are totally welcome! 😀

No worries! You came…

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*silently enters room and clears throat conspicuously*

Hello! Ok, so I’m a little embarrassed, but I thought that this was a different story; so sorry!!! I’d really love to join, but….. I’m currently engaged in other stories (too many, most likely), and I’ve been a bit busy; so I don’t want to join and then not be able to post. I’m sorry!…[Read more]

HA! I AM FINALLY HERE AGAIN!!!!!!! I am so sorry I was gone for that long; I’ve been busy. I’ll try to stay more up to date. 😉

Ok, first of all, those side-characters sound SO cool, and is it all right if I put my blurting to good use and spit out a few more?

As for what branch mine will win…. well….. I was thinking Kix would apprentice…[Read more]

*And Maraly.

I’m here! Sorry, I’ve been busier than normal. I’ll try to keep up, but if I don’t, y’all can just play Artham until I do. Y’all know as much about him as I, anyway 😛

@wingiby-iggiby

@mischievous-thwapling

Commas are so commonly used, yet they are such a pain!!!!!!! And some writers seem to be comma fanatics while others prefer unending sentences 😛

For The Point of Travores, I think I have the skeleton down, though I’m missing a few bones and basically all of the flesh 😛 I’m going to re-do the entire thing, now that I thi…[Read more]

@lonathecat

*bursts through the door waving a sheet of paper in my hand, then doubles over and catches breath. “I — finally — made it!” Hands you the paper and then sheepishly makes my exit. You read the paper:*

Ah! That was so good! I read the part before it, and it is so creative! I like, first of all, how Death is not mean, lol. That’s how…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

Spelled your name wrong yet again…..

I awoke, and when I opened my eyes, I thought they were still closed. There was only black dark, or so it seemed. After a moment I could perceive a faint, ghostly glow emitting from the walls. I tried to sit up, but I was chained down — onto what seemed a stone slab. It was cold and I could feel it’s coolness seeping through my armor — but I h…[Read more]

Thank you, @mischeivious-thwapling ! I’m so glad you liked it! It ‘twas very nice of you! 😛 And I just now realized that, actually, I didn’t make it (my post) very “reader friendly,” (it wasn’t very well structured) so I am definitely going to fix that in the second part….. So sorry ‘bout that! Anyhow, I get having to re-write stuff, I do i…[Read more]

@rusted-knight

Ah, thank you! Gridley sounds like a fantastic and engaging character! And Allen’s fear is a very good one; lit. one that is good to have so you don’t do/become that.

The whirling colors swirled in Ahab’s mind so long and fast that it took him a moment to realize he was standing on solid ground. And the ground looked unbelievably familiar. He was in his office, his den, his man-cave. Ahab’s first instinct was to bend down and kiss the carpet, but then reality set in. The castle couldn’t have so easily broug…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

Wow! I love your mom’s friend’s quote! It is so true!

And I get the intensness of a game; I don’t watch football, but I understand the feeling of just hoping the one your rooting for will win.

And I shall post the first part of Ahab’s fear right now…. 😉

BTW, I found Colma’s fear so engaging! You made it so that it…[Read more]

@everybody

I’ll try to get Ahab’s part worked out soon!

@jasmine

This is fun, I love the fact that you can just create a whole new scene whenever you want. you can just let your imagination go.

I know, right?! It’s totally awesome! And I wonder why you couldn’t edit? Usually it lets you do so after you post it, but if you let it go to long the edit button goes away. Maybe that happened? And…[Read more]