Cathy

@wingiby-iggiby,

Wow. Thanks for your feedback! It’s very helpful. For most of your questions, I can only say that it’s a simplified version. The real version has more details and much more flowery language. However, for this one:

So, now it says that the rebellious pieces were controlling the powers of Ice, Fire, and Water, and were not actually…

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“No, it’s a way of life. And a rather sadistic one at that if you don’t count for eternity.”

Nithel’s steadying chest felt like a blade had cut it. Things had ripped through his chest before, for love, and this hurt worse. Sadistic. Nithel ran his teeth along themselves, looking at the side of Alessio’s face with narrowed eyes. No. Love is self…[Read more]

Absolutely not 🙂 WELCOME TO MY DOMAIN MWHAHAHAHA!!!

“Here.” Faeryn felt a canteen slipped into her fingers. Dead. The wood had no life like the castle. Carefully she sipped the cool water that tasted not quite the same. Rowan. An interesting name for an interesting person, or elf; her footsteps were lighter than humans’.
“Are you goi…[Read more]

Ok, I’m back after just about forever!!!!! 😀

@this-is-not-an-alien

That was an awesome explanation and really helped explain why Ehud does things the way he does! You really know your characters personally! 😀

Also, your guess got several things right! 😛 How did you make it? 😀

And I love Ehud’s enthusiasm for…[Read more]

Alessio jumped to his feet, Nithel’s brows quirking in small confusion. He wasn’t going to run.

That didn’t feel normal, but… I just met him.

Nithel stayed low, watching as the new men stood, holding out his hand to the other, as Jaylin had him. Jaylin… Nithel cast his eyes about, where was he? Nothing. Maybe in the rows of shelves.

“My n…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Hello dearest little sister of mine. Do you trust me?
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The Warning and Message moaned.  Joints creaked as they raised ponderously into the air.

The land around them was abandoned.  Useless.  No cure here.

They rolled thousands of electric-blue eyes, peering, hoping…

Dare they sa…[Read more]

Jaylin watched as the boy in the corner and the new man argued. He really didn’t care anymore. He just wanted to go home. Dharin was gone and everyone was being replaced by strangers. He remembered what Dharin had said about fading. It didn’t hurt. He wanted to fade. To go back to Brarlock to his brother and Marrill. He knew where he…[Read more]

Lol basically me! Btw I’d love to have you join! Though I know you already did lol!

@this-is-not-an-alien Your idea sounds amazing!!

@sylvain-alistair Welcome to the castle!

Sorry to everyone else that I haven’t been on for a while! I’m so behind! But Imma fix that right now! =)

The youth stared up at Nithel, his eyes starved. The ache in Nithel grew deeper, and tightened. There was a fight inside him. Choosing something. Nithel waited, silent.

Then like a veil, the Alessio’s eyes were closed. “Doubtless I have a certain distinction for being a walking tragedy and that certainly accents hope since there’s nothing els…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy and @this-is-not-an-alien

I know I’m intruding on your conversation, but interestingly enough, my two younger sisters have PTSD

@this-is-not-an-alien

 If you have any particular disorder you wanna research I can try to help if ya want   It is pretty sad that I can rarely find that in fiction especially fantasy and even when they do it’s usually inaccurate and shallow.

Thank you so much! I’ll totally remember that! I don’t have anything particular in mind so far. Actu…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Thanks! His appearance and voice are based on Garrett Hedlund (the picture is of Hedlund from the movie Mojave, which I haven’t actually seen…)

Also I might throw Bren in the villain castle if Rowan ends up leaving…

@skylarynn

It is a castle, and there are so many ways! ( @this-is-not-an-alien has started one with a village though.)

You could read through the Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 to get some ideas.

Basically, you just drop them somewhere in the castle, somewhere they won’t be alone too long. Or you could drop them in a room of people as…[Read more]

@skylarynn

I don’t mind if you join!!!

Several characters have been, or are about to be, flipped for new ones. Good timing.

@rusted-knight @anne_the_noob1 @beth20

@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien

(I feel like I’m forgetting somebody. Sorry!) What do you all think?

“A boy in pain, lost and alone. A man, seeking truth. Trying to escape a cage.

But you know what else I see?” Nithel waited, his tone still calm, pained, and honest. Nithel looked down at Alessio’s head. “I see hope.”

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@this-is-not-an-alien

@this-is-not-an-alien

that if they’re told they have to get to the top of the castle to escape and every level ends up being a place from one of the characters’ worlds? And then we get world building with character building and we can fight all the different elements and animals from everybody’s world!

Cathy, that sounds amazing!!! What do you m…[Read more]

Nithel brought a hand to his bare chin, rubbing it. His eyes lowered some in thought.

Then his chin jerked to the side, hands coming down. Alessio. Bowing to the man.

“Respectfully, sir, you are a ignominious liar.” Was spoken before Nithel could think further.

Nithel stood stunned a moment. Face stoic, watching Alessio for a time, before dra…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Woooaaaaahhh that sounds epic!! I say let’s go for it! 😀

Only thing is, the characters can’t actually escape the castle. But that won’t keep us from making them try 😉

Ohhhh what happens if a character gets killed by another character? Wait, they just fade, don’t they. Like the guy who the dragon killed. Teagan?