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@wingiby-iggiby,

Wow. Thanks for your feedback! It’s very helpful. For most of your questions, I can only say that it’s a simplified version. The real version has more details and much more flowery language. However, for this one:

So, now it says that the rebellious pieces were controlling the powers of Ice, Fire, and Water, and were not actually those powers. Also, I don’t know if I just missed this, but what happened to the Guardians after Kening came?

So, the rebellious pieces are Ice, Fire, and Water. Riure was saying that the leaders were the rebellious pieces there. 🙂 As for the Guardians and Kening, I cut out a part about them for condensing purposes. 😉

My deepest thanks for your feedback! This is one of the hardest parts of my book.

(Also, I loved the part about bringing pillows and ice cream and blankets and, funniest of all, “Go Hero” and “Die Villain” signs. You made my day. XD)

@rose-colored-fancy,

Okay! Thanks!

@this-is-not-an-alien,

LOL!! Rosairo and Ehud’s story telling is absolutely PERFECT for their characters! XD