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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
My lord, The Castle, is getting angry.
Everyone was just standing there!!! AND HE HADN’T EVEN PUT THEM IN A TIME-WARP. They were just standing still, not moving.
Well then, if you’re going to be like that…
There was a bright flash of light, and everyone was blinded in it. A strange groaning surrounds them. Then they’re back inside a room.…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic NaNoWriMo discussion in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
Wait, she’s doing what? Medieval hand to hand sword stuff?
What is Cathy talking about? I need to here this. Medieval combat is on my list. xD
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Rose replied to the topic NaNoWriMo discussion in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
You must, and now I shall tout her praises all the more.
Thank you 🙂
LOL, btw she ALSO wrote 15412 words in a week AND finished her first draft AND is revising her first book WHILE drafting the second book in that series WHILE plotting the third WHILE drawing gorgeous art AND learning medieval hand-to-hand and…
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Noah Cochran started the topic Showing Internal Conflict in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
Hey, hey my friends, today, I would like to confess something: One of my beta readers died from over exposure to internal conflict. xD Jk, the reader is fine, but my writer’s conscience is not. 😄
I’ve ran into a noticeable problem in my writing, and that is the way I’m trying to show my internal conflict. I want what my characters are going…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic NaNoWriMo discussion in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
HEH?!!? *whirls on Rose* WHY MUST I HEAR THIS FROM ANOTHER?!?!?!
You must, and now I shall tout her praises all the more. 😉
And, OH, I learned a brilliant tip from @this-is-not-an-alien !!
She taught me to go into each chapter and write down everything I have planned out in my head, like an outline, and t…
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic New Discussion Threat For Theological Debate in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@r-m-archer and @this-is-not-an-alien (because I don’t want Cathy to take my explanation wrongly xD)
We do good works not to earn a place in this kingdom, but to reflect our place in it.
Let me clarify before you take my words in the opposite direction I intended. xD Belief and good works are indeed evidence (or reflection as you used) that we are…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Learning by reading in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
It was so awesome to read y’all’s thoughts on that!
Also, I totally second your opinion about the Mysterious Benedict Society! It was epic!
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Rose replied to the topic NaNoWriMo discussion in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
Oh, good. *wipes forehead* November’s usually a pretty busy month what with school and Thanksgiving and other stuff going on.
Same! It’s kinda a weird time of the year to have it but… *shrugs* I’m going to try to make it work!
HEH?!!? *whirls on Rose* WHY MUST I HEAR THIS FROM ANOTHER?!?!?!
*Laughs sheepishly* In my defense, I d…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
YES!!! I LOVE IT! Aww, Rosy’s wearing Ehud’s ribbon! That’s such a characteristic conversation for them though XD Wowwww, it’s so cool!
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Man, that’s the coolest premise! I love it!! It’s totally something I would read/play! Your explanation is awesome! I love how you developed the setting and how Sasha isn’t your traditional kinda villain. He seemed really cool from what I’ve seen of him in the character castle. (Also, love the names!)
What’s the plot of Liorah’s story…
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic New Discussion Threat For Theological Debate in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
I wondered if the title was on purpose, it seemed like something you would do. 😄
What about Matthew 22:14, Matthew 22:10 and that whole parable? Mark 16:15, why do we preach if we don’t think we can bring others to be born again? John 9:35-41, if we have no grace and no salvation, no choice then we couldn’t be guilty we cou…
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Rose started the topic NaNoWriMo discussion in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
Hello! For once in my life, I’m early to something! XD
During the summer, I participated in Crazy Writing Week, and it helped me more than I ever thought possible. Prior to starting, I was suffering from a lack of motivation and general stuck-ness, even though I was on the home stretch of my first draft. Afterward, I had enough momentum that I…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
LOL IKR!?! And Meira entered the story literally bowling into my MC and proclaiming he was her boyfriend to a buncha thugs she angered while he’s just standing there like 0.0! And now I’m so stuck with her XDD.
That’s such a Meira thing to do XD Poor Alessio XD
IT IS RIDICULOUS HOW DARE YOU CALL ME OUT LIKE THAT WHY DO YOU H…
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@irishcelticredflowercrown I’m so sorry I’ve left you on hold so long!
Of course! Let me know if you end up liking it 🙂 I’ve had all three of those recommended to me. I’ll have to look into it. I didn’t really like the sound of Fullmetal Alchemist’s plot either, and I’ve heard that AoT is incredibly violent. But, I’ve also heard that it’s…[Read more]
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Brooke replied to the topic Hello! Is anybody in the mood to critique a short story? 😀 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@rose-colored-fancy  @this-is-not-an-alien
Hi!! Sorry it has taken me so long to respond! We went camping, and then my computer kept saying I couldn’t access the website, and then when I could, I couldn’t post anything XD So, let’s try this again! 😛
WINGIBY IGGIBY!!!! LOL, how’s your stories been, how’ve you been, how’v…
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Neasa replied to the topic New Discussion Threat For Theological Debate in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
Hii Cathy! Glad to be here❤️
Ack, thanks! My parents really deeply study the Faith and Bible study with us and keep learning themselves so it’s all thanks to them! I don’t really know much about the apparitions in Medjugorje, can you tell me about them?
Thats pretty cool gosh. Good on your parents for educating you…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
@this-is-not-an-alien oooh looks like we have a new bit of drama in here! I believe that Meira has some stiff competition, but since said competition will never admit that, I think she’s safe for now 😉
Which reminds me – I should probably get Saskia into one of these castles sometime. Preferably one that doesn’t have the Shrike lo…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Nice. Well keep me updated on y’all’s path to having them finished. 🙂
How dare you make my Hugon get attacked by wolves?! Jk 😄 Throw whatever you want at him, though if I’m not able to write up what he does, I guess we’ll just have to assume he gets eaten. 😆
Hugon:
Lunging to the side, Hugon let two…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, that’s how I got Meira…
Except ALL I NEEDED WAS ONE SCENE WITH A SERVANT GIRL PASSING PLOT-INFO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wHY are our characters always like that!? I had no clue of what Liorah was like until I wrote that opening scene (Yaknow, the one where she literally storms into a burning building and she has no idea why Gav…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
OHMYGOSH I SOOO ANIME MY CHARACTERS I LOVE ANIME ANIME IS SOOOOOO COOL I WANNA ANIMATE MY BOOK IN ULTRA-REALISTIC ANIME I’M SO GONNA HAVE AN ILLUSTRATED VERSION OF MY NOVEL IN ANIME STYLE I LOVE ANIME!!!!!
*ahem* *awkward silence from interjecting into somebody else’s conversation for no good reason*
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