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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 10 months ago
I gotta use it as an onomatopoeia from now on
You’re gonna what? How is that even…oh, yeah, you’re Cathy, it’s totally possible.
SEE THAT’S WHAT I KEEP TELLING HER COZ I’M LIKE ‘IN MY TIMEZONE THE SUN’S STILL UP BUT I KNOW IT’S WAY PAST YOUR BEDTIME IN YOUR TIMEZONE WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON PINTEREST TALKING TO ME THIS LATE…
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 10 months ago
To be perfectly honest with you, I just kinda assume that my writing could have flaws or quirks in any area, so nothing much surprises me. But I suppose the ‘it needs more introspection for internal conflict’ was what surprised me the most.
Hmmm, I know I said that and I do want to warn you that my personal philosophy on internal con…[Read more]
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MelancholicWriter replied to the topic Short Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Yeah that should work.
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 10 months ago
FYI, Cavirmablablah, I AM GETTING TO IT AND I HAVE STARTED TTD 2 WHILE I’M BETA READING FOR SOMEONE WHO’S PUBLISHING FEBUARY!!!!!!
It’s fine, take as many years as you would like. 🙂
What’s the piece of feedback that surprised you the most?
To be perfectly honest with you, I just kinda assume that my wri…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 10 months ago
I’m afraid to say that the feedback is all over the place. xD Some of my betas really liked a couple of the characters, and others thought those characters had serious problems (and vice versa).
I suppose the most common agreement is that the fight scenes to be edited and shortened (though one of my beta’s likes them a sur…
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 10 months ago
Hey Rose, I’m doing alright. The weather is frigid in Missouri, so I assume that the Netherlands is covered in ice. School started, and college starts soon, so I solemnly await busyness.
How about you?
Pretty good! We had a couple really icy days already, but now we’ve returned to the natural Dutch state. Mud. Lots of it. Rai…[Read more] -
Taylor Clogston replied to the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
I published my book! Ebook available now, other formats available in future when I can get to them.
Thank you to @this-is-not-an-alien for beta reading!
This ended up as my final blurb:
Planet Dirt: Remnant of an exile world, ground down by governmental and megacorp warring.
The Accident a generation ago erased what its inhabitants had not…
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Erynne replied to the topic MBTI stuffs in the forum Characters 4 years, 10 months ago
twenty seconds have past so here i is tagging y’all *evil grin*
@0brain-of-the-surface-world
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Article about non-perfectionist rewriting in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Yikes! I’m so sorry to hear that. I’m glad you’re feeling better. 🙂
SHE HATH PREVAILED!!! *thunderous applause by the masses* XD
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Article about non-perfectionist rewriting in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Thank you! I spent New Year’s Eve with a splitting headache, but the next day was pretty nice. I hope the new year is treating you well too :-}
Good job defeating recaptcha, lol. Glad you liked the article! Hopefully if you felt attacked that means it sparked a writing idea =P
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
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K. A. Grey replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@winter_rose That prompt sounds perfect! Before I say I’ll join though, I’ll see who is joining and who would be willing to be a judge for this round. Also, since Christmas Eve is tomorrow, let’s extend the deadline to Monday instead.
Tagging @emma-walker@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien @calidris @erynne @noah-cochran
Also, Noah is the o…[Read more]
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Winter Rose replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@this-is-not-an-alien @k-a-grey
Thank you both for your feedback!
I’m not used to working with such a small word count, so it was helpful to see the areas that I need to polish.
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Is it part of a larger story, or is it just this scene?
It is part of a much larger story, at least I want it to be. Right now it’s still in the…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Thank you! I don’t believe I write arguments well, so I’m pleased that you liked it.
Also, @winter-rose
I read your submission last night and Ahhhh! I MUST know the rest of the story!!! Is it part of a larger story, or is it just this scene?
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Erynne replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Sorry I haven’t been active here I am on vaca lol ( @this-is-not-an-alien I am in North Carolina and I’ll be back Monday. I can see what you say I just can’t respond) if there is one happening when I’m on my way home I might be able to do it.
Your post caught my eye. I’m sorry to hear that, is everything alright? Do you need to…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Haha happy to hear it😂😂
Lorcan
Lorcan felt the irritation towards Liorah’s words grow – then it suddenly evaporated. And he burst out laughing.
Lorcan wasn’t sure what to make of this sudden outburst, this breaking down of his icy wall – then again, nothing was normal anymore.
Liorah looked at him like he had gone cra…[Read more]
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K. A. Grey replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@this-is-not-an-alien I’ll be the other judge! I might tag Noah to be a backup judge later too.
@emma-walker @erynne @calidris @joelle-stone @winter_rose @anyoneelse
Hey, do you want to join this prompt?
The dealine is tomorrow night. Preferably. 500 words or less, and no peeking at the other contestant’s work until you submit your own.
Here’s…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Here’s my new character introductions 🙂 For those who know Sasha from the Villain Castle (looking at you @this-is-not-an-alien) he’s changed drastically since then
Saskia “Skia” X:
Like Basil and Sasha, Saskia was one of many super soldiers developed in Project Goldenseal. She’s since escaped, and is currently making a living as a mercenary (…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
My Lord Castle just waits.
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When the table appeared, Nithel’s stomach flipped and his mouth watered. It had been two nights since he’d eaten the dried rusk. How long since he’d actually had food, though. Egad… He wanted to fall upon the fruit, the meat, the bread, and truthfully, the possibility of poison hadn’t even crossed…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Mini Prompt Wars in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@noah-cochran, @this-is-not-an-alien, @k-a-grey
Judge’s Decision
Cathy: Gender…I can’t decide. It seems like it should be male, but I’m guessing female
Noah: Gender: male
Grey: Gender: female
(Now you guys have to tell us when all the judging is over–you know that, right?)
My vote goes to @noah-cochran.
Thanks for the…[Read more]
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