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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Tullian
His eyes were adjusting to the light. There were long black slithering things on the floor. Snakes!
So that’s source of the fear.
Just to his left one of the people that had come in with Tullian shrieked. Tullian winced. It wasn’t fear. It was terror. And pain–a snake had latched onto his leg. Tullian tried to slow his breathing. In.…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Lol, I understood the sentence. Um, I’m not real sure. When I say he “feels” others’ emotions I guess I mean more that he senses their emotions. He could look at you and instantly know that you’re afraid. He isn’t necessarily afraid himself, at least not in the same way. That’s how a perfect Empath works. Tullian is still in training,…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
(Lol I’m a senior in high school and college stuff and all that I’m just, yeah XD today was preview day at a nearby college so)
Kallun nodded, “I’m just glad you’re alright.” He was breathing hard still.
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
(are you alright or are you just referring to the rp?)
“I don’t know. She’s breathing consistently, but that seems to be it…”
Almost immediately after the words left his mouth Ellie coughed more water up and quickly sat up gasping for air, “Sorry… Kallun” she said in between gasps.
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
@joelle-stone here you go!
Chapter 4
In the morning, a gray fog had settled over the fort and the surrounding terrain, minimizing visibility, and giving the land an eery look. Abner woke early, and patrolled the walls, straining his eyes for any sight of the enemy, but the stubborn fog kept them blind.
Lieutenant North joined him,…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Literally throwing my characters into the room. 😁
Isn’t it fun?! One of the joys of being an author…*smiles contentedly*
Then his face contorted into a pained, pinched scream.
I looked down, and there was a snake with its jaws clamped around his ankle.
Wow, Ruan hasn’t been in the castle for a minute, and he’s already been…[Read more]
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic What if these characters met? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Oh! *facepalms*
I didn’t see it. Oops 😬. And he sounds pretty good! 👍
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Rebekah12 replied to the topic What if these characters met? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
My last post did suggest a character ideaNo worries! I’m just glad you finally found the time to come back 😉
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic What if these characters met? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
I love that idea! But who should it be? Obviously nobody from anyone currently in the castle. Hmm…
And I’m sorry I haven’t really been on in a while.
~Kylie
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga 5th book RP in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Hey y’all! Sorry I haven’t been on recently. *looks sheepish*
Does anyone have ideas for how the Wingfeathers find out Sylvie is their cousin? I’m stumped on that regard.
~Kylie
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Me and my class are going to battle a court case (not real) against another class in front of a judge. My role is the Closing Prosecution Attorney. It’s really fun!
Sorry I haven’t been on lately! Does anyone have ideas for what’s next?
~Kylie
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic What is the most bizarre creature you have created for your WIP? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
That’s ingenious! Very cool. At first, your description reminded me of the Ra’zac in the Eragon series, but your Kragvora are certainly original. I like how you combined the concept of vampirism with its other aspects.
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
(Lol right well I’m stressed so writer stressed equals chara stressed xD)
Pia was across the River now and watched Kallun as he took off his coat and squeezed the water out of it, breathing hard.
“Are you alright, Kallun?”
He nodded and opened his mouth to reply but a cough came out.
K’Nika walked over to Julian and Ellie, “Is she okay?” -
Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
(“Slightly stressed” how dare he get stressed? Any other person would be totally relaxed in this situation)
Julian followed her into the water to meet Kallun in the water. He grabbed onto Ellie, pulling her onto shore. He noticed she was holding onto the gold piece, but it didn’t register to him what it was. He grabbed it from her hand and threw…[Read more]
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Joshua Scheele replied to the topic What is the most bizarre creature you have created for your WIP? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Those are awesome creatures! My world has a lot of dragons and dinosaur-inspired creatures.
Most of my evil creatures are all lab creations, created for a great war. The evil side lost but their creatures melted away into the shadows and have spread across the world.
One particular favorite is my Kragvora. They are humanoids…[Read more]
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Merie replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
ERIK
A scream shattered the silence around him.
Erik sighed. Perhaps he wasn’t meant to touch the food after all… Oh well. We’ll deal with this later.
Curiosity aroused, he left the kitchens, heading in the direction of the noise. It didn’t sound like your usual ghostly-specter-in-the-haunted-mansion kind of scream, more like a man who was…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
(Lol oooooo magiccccc XD)
Kallun pulled her into the bubble, slightly stressed out. He tried to get to the banks as quickly as he could.
K’Nika ran over and sloshed into the water, “We have to help him!”
(he’s not doing mouth to mouth resuscitation lol XD)
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
(sorry, I died. I’m back now.)
(ohmygoodness have you seen Tinker Bell The Pirate Fairy??? She does that exact same thing with the water and that’s exactly what is going through my mind)
She saw Kallun splash into the water as she went down and tried her best to swim up. Ha! She was going somewhere, but something caught her eye. Something…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Whoa, sorry, seemed to have died for a while.
I hope you are feeling better. I am so sorry you were sick.
Feeling much better now, thanks! My body just decided to quit working for a day, I guess.
Is your brother extorting money from you? 😁
He is, please help me. I’m scared 🥺
I’d pay him in Monopoly money and tell hi…
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Hi Erynne!
I am so far behind on emails. I am sorry if I haven’t replied. I subscribed to a lot of newsletters recently and I think I am getting a little behind in reading. Plus I have had a project assigned to me at work and I’m am finding very little time to keep plunging through my current novel. I am enjoying your newsletter, by the way. I…[Read more]-
No problem! I was just wondering. I’m thrilled you’re enjoying the newsletter. Unfortunately, I’m not going to be able to send pt 2 of the comedy thing this week. I have had a very busy and stressful week and didn’t have time to work on it. I’ll be praying for you and your work project.
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Thank you, Erynne! I am looking forward to Part 2. I think we all could use a little more humor in our stories, these days. I know I certainly need to.
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 3 months ago
Okay, so I’m going to try something I’ve never tried before:
Literally throwing my characters into the room. 😁
I always try to do something subtle and seamless when introducing my characters, but NO MORE *swipes arm around*
*knocks over the table lamp*
*is unaware of the fire that started*
😐
As evidenced, I am strange.
Very…[Read more]
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