Bethany

@devastate-landing

Hey Linyang!

I haven’t done much actual drafting, but I have done some worldbuilding. I have so much stuff I want to cram in that I’m not sure whether to split it up into several worlds or not. Anyone else have this problem?

But anyway, they all involve elemental magic, multiple races, and either an unlikely hero or an…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I’ve never played laser tag either lol. But the idea sounds really cool! Torsten has certainly never seen a laser in his life.

Extreme climates sounds cool (no pun intended) too. If I add in Malar, the snow idea could be pretty crazy since he’s never seen it either, living in the desert and all. (Maybe we can do the desert…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I remember you saying Liorah liked to adopt characters. It seems that that might be happening to  Torsten 😉

Torsten

My tears would not stop. I kept wiping my nose and eyes to keep any tears from falling onto the floor. I didn’t want to get in trouble for making a mess, even if I was dead.

“This isn’t over, you illegitimate son of a camel,” I heard a gruff but feminine voice say. I slowly looked up, thinking the words were directed at me. I didn’t…[Read more]

<b>Torsten</b>

I had never run so fast in my life. Which does not mean I was actually running fast. We shetts are not known for our speed, and compared to any other shett I was slower than a rock.

How ironic it was that I was now being chased by sentient rocks. Giants, golems, <i>rumi</i>–whatever they were called I didn’t want to meet them. T…[Read more]

Ok, I’ll try! (Again, please forgive me if my posts are extremely sporadic. I may need to drop out at any moment.)

Here’s my character:

Torsten Kame

Male, 34 years old (around 19 in human years). He’s a creature I made up called a shett–think basically a giant tortoise that walks on its back legs. Around 7 feet high. (I can share a picture if…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I can maybe join! I don’t know how active I could be, and I don’t really know where to begin, but I can try.

I could use my characters Torsten or Malar. Who are so different it would be quite interesting to see them together.

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thank you for your feedback! I’ll get back with a longer reply sometime, but thank you so much for your detailed critique.

I must admit hearing somebody else read my work was a bit strange, but you did a great job. Your voices were great.

@this-is-not-an-alien

Thank you so much!

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Wow, thank you so much! Yes, I have heard that phrase–first learned it in Latin class as “Fortes fortuna juvat.”

I would love to hear your dramatization. This is just a piece I wrote several months ago and I have not written any more of it (I have this and one paragraph of notes XD). I feared it might be confusing,…[Read more]