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Skylarynn replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Thanks! My mom’s description of how I write is that almost every sentence is ‘this, this and this’ and I think I still haven’t fixed it…:’D
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Well, Jericho is pretty far on the wary side given her previous experiences (her student betrayed her, which led to the deaths of everyone she loved) and she’s learned the dangers of serving someone and how she can be used. Brendin has also been rather horribly abused, and the fact that Malvat a) looks resemblant of a wyvern and…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
I think she has suspicions that he can do some warpy things based on how there’s three people in there. And the fact that he’s clearly not like the dragons she knows (who only gained sentience after a good two decades or so). Also out of curiosity, did he have any ideas of just dropping them in the lava if they asked him to c…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
@joelle-stone
What is it that Malvat thinks Jericho knows? I just want to make sure. -
Skylarynn replied to the topic Villain/Antagonist Development Questions in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
Still continuing the above
21. What are you ashamed of doing?
Drowning Sindri. I should not have let my anger get the better of me.
22. What line will you never cross?
I’ve never really had lines to begin with. I would say I’d never harm an innocent to get to someone else, but I know myself too well to say that. I suppose the only thing I…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
I probably should’ve mentioned but the story is written with a deliberately slow beginning because the style I’m writing in is akin to Tolkien’s and the story isn’t completely packed with action and adventure. But I probably should work some setting in there yeah…
(Also it’s IronSTORM, not IronSTONE. Slight dif…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Introduce Your Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
So in my adaptation of Star Wars to an arabian nights-esque story, some changes have been made to characters.
Specifically:
Chewbacca is now a camel named Balveer
C-3P0 is now a human slave (enslaved because of his criminal record as a con man)
R2-D2 is a courier cat named Nakul
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Brendin could see that the boy was panicking. Small flames began to form along his arms, dancing and flickering around Brendin’s hands. He quelled them, drawing the fire away from Alessio and funneling it away into his Syne. Slowly the boy calmed and returned to reality, anxiously glancing around. Trying to see if he’d set something on fire…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Do you think I should post Jericho’s reaction to Malvat or wait for Cathy to post so I can have Brendin doing stuff too?
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien
Please critique if you could. Also you may notice something if you reread the character castle before reading this…
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Doing this literally right before work but since when has time management been a skill of mine…
Also hi
Beginning of my main Haven world story
@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien (the one Brendin’s in)
Ada Warin was beautiful in a wild, hunted way. Her narrow face, framed with the waist-length knotted brown curls that adorned her head, had…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Wow, we all have older characters. Malvat somewhere between *thinks* 500 and 700 years old, I think. So not old compared to Nithel, Brendin, and Jericho. 🙂
Brendin is only in his thirties, I’m pretty sure 500-700 tops that…
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Villain/Antagonist Development Questions in the forum Characters 5 years, 3 months ago
Continuing the above
11. Do you desire to protect anyone?
Rolinde. She is precious to me.
12. Who do you admire and why?
Danior, I suppose. His level-headedness is unmatched in our little band.
13. Who annoys you?
Hester, at times. She is a bitter creature. Serpo, though he dislikes me, takes care not to become a nuisance at lea…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Introduce Your Story in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I look a lot into older cultures and their beliefs and usually match them to the correlating culture in my work, sometimes adding bits and pieces of other cultures too. Ones I’ve made so far:
An Abrahamic religion that is mostly Christian but has traditions and other bits and pieces from Judaism, Islam, Hinduism, and Romani beliefs -…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
@erynne
I’m fine with you starting with someone new if you want. -
Skylarynn replied to the topic RP ? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
The boar erupted out of the thicket in a rage, goring a few of the dogs that were not quick enough to get out of the way. It was massive, much larger than they’d anticipated, and almost immediately broke through the circle of spearmen around the thicket. As the boar charged their way Amrath danced his mare to the side, out of the boar’s path, b…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
@erynne @this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner
So…are more villains gonna show up, or will Karayan and Þorunn gonna continue to awkwardly stare at each other?
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
“Get. Out. Of my head.”
Brendin squeezed Alessio’s shoulder gently to try and bring back the lad’s focus. “Alessio, lower your bow,” he repeated. He recognized his expression, the panic and fear and anger. The nausea from another mind invading your own.
Memories flashed through Brendin’s mind, filled with screams once more, but this time t…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
No, he’d still notice her
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