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Active 6 years, 11 months ago-
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
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This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!
Rest in Him
I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
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Here’s this week’s.
Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wineBlown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂
Thank You for Forgiving Me
Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 7 months ago
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Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!
This week’s is one that I wrote more recently. It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.
As usual,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 8 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A
And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂
My…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 8 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!
Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
But all you think about is that…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 8 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic archiving the guilds in the forum Announcements 5 years, 9 months ago
Heads up. We’re moving the guilds to the archives. You’ll still be able to access old posts, but you won’t be able to make new ones.…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 9 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Two poems this week!
This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!
Watchmen (Sound it Loud)
Watchman,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 10 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Hope you all are doing well. As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂
Torchlighters
Go! the torch must be carried on
All the…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]
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Selah CJW started the topic Summoning Beta Readers! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
Hello, all! It seems like ages since I’ve last been on here, and I’m sure I’m missing some tags for my former beta group…if so, I’m sorry. ::P I’m tagging what I hope is all of you who currently have access to my book even if you have not read it yet, and probably some of you who don’t. I know there’s gotta be a couple of you tagged who haven’t…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.
This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!
The Surrendering
I’m down to my last…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!
Awaken the Dawn
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
@parker @vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist @katthewriter @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer ( please tag some others who think might like this)
This is not my usual style of poetry, but the inspiration hit so hard . . . I had to write it. Critique it heartless…[Read more]
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