K.M. Small

@karthmin, @northerner, @morreafirebird, @kelly-lundgren, @princess-foo, @sarah-inkdragon

Hello again! The time of our contest draws near, and I was wondering if you wonderful souls would have the time to beta-read the new draft of Goddess / Zauberin (link below), mainly for the changed ending. It now sits under 5k words – but I want to make sure…[Read more]

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@morreafirebird Oooooohhhh… I thought your name was Audrey.  Okay.  I am now not confused. 😉

@morreafirebird *throws feathers* Nice to meet you Khylie. Welcome to Story Embers! Fortunately you’re in the best guild. Kree, kree Ereki! 😛

I think I’m not confused. Just hopefully you aren’t confused about whether I’m confused. That would be confusing. Now wouldn’t it? Too much confusion ties your brain in knots that are confusing to untie. *grins*

@morreafirebird Here’s the newest version… Thank you so much for your help! Please don’t feel like you have to look it over again if you don’t want to… you’ve done a lot already 🙂 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nQYPvy3fsQMsmyzVu9nDXrQGh2IKylfR/view?usp=sharing

Thanks for the clarification @morreafirebird! At least the tag stays the same. 😛

(And yeah, if  you could send your updated email address that would be awesome. 🙂 Thanks!)

@morreafirebird

I saw this in my inbox and just stared at it for a bit thinking, “Who on earth is K.M.Small?” I’m glad I’ve got that sorted out now 🙂

@princess-foo *nods* Yeah, I should’ve tried to do more write-ins, but I was graduating too. Yay! 😛
Maybe if we keep trying we’ll be able to get more people to do it. I hope so at least. I’ll try to do more than just one next time. 😀
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The Word War results are in!
New Wessex: 17,592
Knaphollow: 10,183
Erekdale: 9,481
Rillumen: 6,887
Parami…[Read more]

@catwing

A pillow stuffed with feathers…wait…

@morreafirebird @devastate-lasting

How are all your goals going this week?

Has everyone turned in their word counts? If you haven’t yet, now would be a good time. 🙂

Also how do you think I’m doing as the Word Master. Is there something I could improve on?

@hope-ann @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @enu @the-inkspiller @filewriter @princess-foo @emgc @karthmin @ke…[Read more]

@morreafirebird Thank you so much again for your feedback! If you don’t mind, here it is again, edited.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mtZTpHXWK3ol3g6pfp6kTIaPf76i5zsr/view?usp=sharing

*unvanishes* Kree! The word war ended yesterday! So be sure to turn in your word counts!
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Here’s the form.
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@hope-ann @mlbolangerauthor @lady-frosttongue @sarah-inkdragon @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @enu @the-inkspiller @filewriter @princess-foo @emgc @karthmin @kelly-lundgren @allison-grace @sarah-narnathron @ajaj2000
@warrenluth…[Read more]

@morreafirebird Thank you so much for your feedback! Yeah, I don’t really have much experience with character arcs, but I’ll try my best to improve the story.

Do you mind if I post an edited version of the story later?

Preliminary Commentary (First Pass); @morreafirebird

Criticisms and Questions:

Unclear who or what Gedeon is, who Markus is; took a couple of takes to get that the dragon and celestial objects were a description of the outer design of the vase.

Gedeon’s motivations are unclear and confusing. He wants pretty things because… what? And why the…[Read more]

@seekjustice That would be awesome! Thank you!!!!!

@kelly-lundgren @seekjustice @morreafirebird @catwing

Are y’all’s goals going okay???