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Devastate Lasting replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago

@morreafirebird Thank you so much again for your feedback! If you don’t mind, here it is again, edited.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mtZTpHXWK3ol3g6pfp6kTIaPf76i5zsr/view?usp=sharing