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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Short Story Contest #2 Critique Request in the forum Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
@karthmin, @northerner, @morreafirebird, @kelly-lundgren, @princess-foo, @sarah-inkdragon
Hello again! The time of our contest draws near, and I was wondering if you wonderful souls would have the time to beta-read the new draft of Goddess / Zauberin (link below), mainly for the changed ending. It now sits under 5k words – but I want to make sure that the ending doesn’t feel like cheating.
And if you have submissions of your own, I would be glad to lend my critique.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NaHqFDg7dMNNCNVgr8Fsp4yrxMQin_iqnea0-NajPvw/edit?usp=sharing










