Mischievous Thwapling

@winter_rose

Yeah, I suppose I was just guessing what Wingiby Iggiby said, but really whatever works for you.  After all, you’re the one taking the time to do it! 😀

@jasmine

Sure!! I would love for you to join!  The limit is ten people, and I think we still have some open slots. Jump right in!

@lonathecat

Yes, commas are the death of me, too!! The nasty little things. XD

And yeah, no problem! It was actually really helpful for me to give feedback, ’cause I want to work on how I give critique. I’m kinda bad at it, lol.

@wingiby-iggiby

Thank you so much!!! That really means a lot 😀

I LOVED your post.  I feel like you did a fantastic job writing from Ahab’s POV; both in how he reacted, but in that villain-y type way too.  And, lol, I died from laughter at these this line:

“Ahab looked her straight in the eye. “Not too much. I can still see your impudent lit…[Read more]

@millennium and @this-is-not-an-alien

Thanks, lol!
And Cathy, thank you again!  I think Ehud is SUPER resourceful! I mean, how in the beginning he used candle wax  for his injured leg (it was candle wax, right? I don’t totally remember, that feels so long ago) and how he got down from the tree!

@lonathecat

That was awesome!! And don’t worry; to me, it wasn’t too long.  Once I posted something about maybe twice as long as your entire post on another website that shut down.. *glances apologetically at Wingiby Iggiby and Joelle Stone*

But anyway, yeah, I thought it was really good.  One thing I did notice was this:

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I’m pretty sure t…[Read more]

Whoo hoo! Nice posts, @millennium and @this-is-not-an-alien !

This is gonna sound weird, I just want to make sure so stuff isn’t confusing, but you guys saw my post on page 15, right? The one where Colma falls out of a tree? XD

@joelle-stone

Yay! Good job, your planets/countries sound really cool, and that’s a brilliant reason for Vika to be a spy in Mel’s planet. (If I’m understanding right XD)

Umm….. Forgetting something…. I can FEEL IT!!! Ugh *facepalms* No matter. I’ll just remember what I’m forgetting at 3:00 am tonight so….

Hey! Glad your back, Kylie!

Yeah, the not changing history thing makes sense. I mean, when Kylie originally told us about the story, didn’t she say that Percy, Cassie, and Anie go back in time and tell their parents it because their parents are historians and stuff? So I guess it would make more sense for them to probably try to go back carefully…[Read more]

Boy, this is getting confusing XD

I know!! I saw that one, but it disappeared. In it, I think she mentioned Hetsu, right?

Uh, I think so. I see one at the top of page 23, then one right below that.

@melodyjoy

Yes, I agree! This is getting so funny!

@melodyjoy

That makes a lot of sense! Thank you! 😀 Sorry for being so oblivious all the time, lol.

@wingiby-iggiby

Lol, you’re fine. That’s so funny! I was actually wondering why you were posting it again and again XD

BTW, I really like your forum sign-off thing (or whatever it’s called):

“Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!”

Every time I read it, it makes me smile.