(Hahaha)

“Oh…okay.” She picked up her bow and an arrow praying she wouldn’t hit the poor soul. Concentrating on her target she pulled the arrow back. The arrow shot out of her hands and she closed her eyes afraid she would hit something that she wasn’t supposed to.

(He could make a big hollow ball and they could be like hamsters inside it XDXD)

“I was thinking that you could use you bow. Don’t hit whoever it is, just shoot it near them, maybe they’ll see it, and see us.”

(True… He’s not freakishly strong by chance, is he? XD)

“We can’t step foot in this storm. We would be burned to death instantly.”

It sounds really ciool

Oh dear…

I just realized something:

I forgot Bramber.

*sheepish smile*

Oops. 😛

I was wondering if I could some feedback on this particular idea I have had for the past couple of years. There is a particular narrative I want to include, but now I’m not so sure anymore if I even want to, because it is confusing and a bit problematic.

It’s basically the superhero alter ego type: a character disguises himself as a mys…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby

@jasmine

I really just don’t know what to say… Would an old Irish blessing be all right?
<p style=”text-align: center;”>“May the Road rise to meet you</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>And the Wind be at your back</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>And may God hold you in the palms of His hands”</p>
Or something like that…

NORA’S…[Read more]

Thanks a bunch! 💖💖💖

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Your story has been submitted!

No, it’s my pen name. I like it too, though!

@arindown

Hi Gracie,

Feel free to jump into the discussion. I would love to hear your thoughts on the topic, even if you haven’t employed it yet.

I am also including a kind of biblical touchpoint in my WIP that involves a cursed race of human-animal hybrids that tie back to one of the grandsons of Cain in the Genesis account. [Genesis…[Read more]

Tick tock
Tick tock…
Everything, everything cracks. The walls look like spider thread, the people like only memory ghosts. What was the name I thought, I saw his face so clearly that second. Is all lies. I can taste gunpowder in the air, crisp red on the floor like rose petals. And I’m the beast, this isn’t real! My head feels like it’s going t…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world @rusted-knight

This is such a cool discussion. Can’t say I have anything to add to it (none of my WIP’s include actual angels), but I’m following along to see what ya’ll have to say about all of it.

@rusted-knight

Thank you. Do you have an excerpt or scene where you have a representative character that is of the angel type? And would you mind sharing a brief excerpt of it? I would like to see how you guys use these examples and what indicators you employ to hint at such an angelic nature.

My WIP is using these in a kind of reverse manner,…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world
Well this is an interesting topic. Angels in scripture are often shown as messengers. They appear long enough to deliver and vanish. But for us writers, brief encounters like that are less favorable for creating our worlds. Personally I would follow the example of Raphael in the Book of Tobit. Taking the form of a…[Read more]

ok! Thank you!

Oh thanks!💗 I like the name Joelle Stone, is it your real name?

@this-is-not-an-alien,

Yes, it is. (lol, I’ve been dying to call him that since it occurred to me XD) I better clarify it better right?

Nah, I don’t think so (I mean, if you want to, go ahead). I was just trying to figure out if I should italicize it on the doc or not. XD

(And Lily’s a cool name – it doesn’t ask for more than that. :))

*oik, skims over page twice* (to the person who deleted the extra post I accidentally posted twice, you are incredible how do you work so fast I didn’t even ask anybody for help and you have a whole huge forum to run! You are epic!!!)

*(lol me assuming it’s a person an not a highly sophisticated program…either it’s awesome, you’re awesome!)*

Awwww (I bet it was a great read tho!)

Yes, it is. (lol, I’ve been dying to call him that since it occurred to me XD) I better clarify it better right?

My name is Lily, will it accept just a first name I’m not supposed to give too much personal information? My pen name is Cathy Rose. I used the “Castle ruins are not an ideal place to…[Read more]

awwwww!

My name is Lily, I’m not supposed to give much personal information, will it accept just Lily? My penname is Cathy Rose. I used the “Castle ruins were not an ideal place to establish a new empire-but I’d try my best.” I would absolutely like feedback on my submission XD!

lol (I’ve been dying to call him that ever since it occurred to…[Read more]