Oh…dear. On this week’s apocalypse 2021. Lol, sorry. It’s a interesting spin of modern day and that scripture about the End Times, I can almost hear Biblical passages through your flash fiction, it’s really good! And the sense of it all coming ‘like a thief in the night’ because of poisonous philosophy and complacency.

He had hoped helping Vulferym might be something of a friendly gesture, but then he hadn’t really expected anything to come of it. Why did he care how the man responded? He shouldn’t, but Vulferym was something reminiscent of normalcy, reflective of how Alessio expected people to treat him.
After no response from the man, Alessio slowly set the…[Read more]

Ha ha! It’s funny how your own characters can surprise you. That happens to me to.

Thanks! I really couldn’t picture Gwendolyn going down without a fight. Actually, if everyone would have been on the other side of the door she probably would have just let it happen, but since she wasn’t the only one in danger, she felt the need to…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

“N-no,” His voice cracked. “I’m not going, you can’t make me! I’m not going I’m not going!”
He fought my grip harder than he ever had before but I wasn’t giving in. He deserved much better than me, and he was young enough, vibrant enough, he’d recover. He might always miss me but he’d recover.
“You can’t make me! Please!”…

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@nuetrobolt

i plan on returning definitely!

Yeah, you should come back some time.

No problemo

Klein didn’t like the eyes looking at him. He had never been the center of attention. Seeking shelter, Klein put the helmet back on. The alarm had stopped now. The suit’s systems were back to normal. Everyone was still looking at him. He had to shift attention away from himself.

“I’ll get the door.”

Drawing his gun, Klein walked to the door.…[Read more]

Ni de cona, they can’t just sell their lives away. No reason or rhyme, our captor won’t take his end te guste o no. I keep hold of Ehud I know what he’ll do next, asi he’ll volunteer next if he’s not convinced I have a plan. I don’t. Perdoname, Dios mio, I don’t. I can feel heat through his shoulders, hot sweat trickling through his hair, para ya…[Read more]

Um, anyone here?

Hi Oreo!!!

Glad you’re with (at least halfway) us again!!!

@joelle-stone

Aw, thx so much!! I’ve gotta say that I enjoy writing emotional scenes.   You are too, BTW…

You’re welcome and thank you so much!

Thranduil’s boots from the Hobbit are pretty swag, as are Legolas’ and Tauriel’s. Aragorn’s from LOTR are okay… Ahem, nvm.

*Looks them up*

Thranduil’s are really cool! Ooh, Tauriel’s are AWESOME! I want t…[Read more]

@skylarynn

oki doke

@emma-walker I’ll start when I can but it may be a bit first

@skylarynn I’m ready when you are 😉

@joelle-stone

Thanks!

@everybody

So, did we decide if either A or B or both die in the end? And do either of them turn good?

@winter_rose,

LOVE your new profile pic!

1. I think if we have one or even two characters lose but still win, that would be awesome. 🙂
2. Oh, we each have a branch? I didn’t know that, heh heh heh.
3. I love your ideas for the Military and Legislative branch; we should definitely go with those! Scientific, Technology, TOU, and Diplomacy are all…

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@anne_the_noob14,

Good point! *makes note to do more research* Thank you!!

(How’s life Dharin-writer?)

Welcome back @birds-rock!! Totally understandable (life has been slamming me lately too, so I get it).

@rose-colored-fancy,

*Stifled sobbing* Oh. My. Goodness, that was so amazing! It felt so real I was genuinely scared for her. Her thoughts felt so real and genuine, it was magnificent! You’re so amazing at emotional scenes, I just get dragged along by Riure’s narration, and her thoughts feel so real and make me love her even more.

Aw, thx so muc…[Read more]

Oh, whoops. The * in my post was supposed to remind me to put that those lyrics are from The Last Goodbye by Billy Boyd. Heh heh. 🙂