Ava Murbarger

@denali-christianson,

Have you fallen off the face of the planet or are you just taking a vacation to Mars?

@crazywriter,

*rubs hands* Ok, let’s get the rest of this puppy critiqued!!

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It was with baited breath that the council anticipated Abner’s decision. The young king stood, cleared his throat, and spoke.

“Lords of the Council, in response to the unexpected messenger, I have come to a decision.” Abner swallowed, mulling the weight of his f…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Haha it was a huge adjustment, but a good one too! I’m just gonna wait and see what God has in store for me. So I’m studying film   one is a research module where you get to pick your topic, and the others are animation and music in film. I’m really liking them so far!

Oh man that sounds like an awesome major!! That soun…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Wow, that sounds hectic! I can imagine it’s a big adjustment, but I’m glad you’re enjoying it! What are you studying?

Did you have any issues with the three big storms? I’m pretty sure they were over England as well. We certainly felt all of them, but praise God we barely have damages. It was definitely stressful though.…

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@irishcelticredflowercrown

I’m loving it thanks for asking! Living with strangers was hard at first but I’m getting used to it   I am also making some new friends plus I joined the gym so I’m busy busy! Aand I also get time to work on my WIP.

Wow, that sounds hectic! I can imagine it’s a big adjustment, but I’m glad you’re enjoying it! What ar…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown
Yeah I guess a character could have multiple motives. I mean us humans do so the people we create can too.

Klein slowly rounded the exit of the tunnel. The room beyond opened up exponentially. A stairwell, seemingly carved out of the wall led to the floor. Columns that made sequoia trees small rose up to a ceiling…[Read more]

Pia snorted, “He Can see just fine in the dark, when is humans see only black.”
“It’s just strange words and symbols that I do not know.” Kallun added.

“Hm… maybe you will be able to tell when we can see better,” Ellie stated

“Yes, but they are so strangely put they don’t make any sense.” Kallun replied, studying the objects.

“Are you able to see any inscriptions on it in this light?” Ellie asked

(Lolol)

Kallun looked up. “As you are quite aware, I can mold rocks and metal. But this, no matter how hard I press, it remains its shape.”

”that’s queer.” Pia replied. Fingering her pike, made of metal and rock itself.

K’Nika watched silently.

(He held out his hands. He placed them in his hands. My mind read it like a robot and it was funny XD)

“What is it?” Eliana asked

Kimmi,

That is amazing and heart-wrenching.  Very evocative and poignant.  Great job!

Some pain can only be mitigated by being present and connected.

Be happy with those who are happy, and weep with those who weep. [Romans 12:15 NLT]

(What amused you? Lol)

Kallun examined them, Pia rested her chin on his shoulder and watched from behind him.
He was originally careful not to accidentally change the objects shape, but then realized something. “Huh.” He murmured thoughtfully.

He placed them in his hands.

(I laughed at this)

Kallun rolled his eyes. “Fine. Let me see them.” He held out his hands.

“Well it doesn’t matter. The point is I’ve found these and I don’t know what to do with them”

Cool, yeah, that works great.

Perhaps if she’s a sailor, she wound up in this world during a storm?

Portals to other worlds are likely to appear in such chaos, and look like swirling vortexes of natural materials nearby, with light and music also coming from them.

So in a wild storm at sea, one forms in front of Samantha, made of lightning, wind, and water. A song comes from…[Read more]

She can just find herself in the city, I think.

Yeah, it mostly did but lemme go drink coffee and get some caffeine lol