Adrelle

“Just…need air…” Alessio whispered, wilting again.

Nithel’s jaw set, and he nodded. He put his arm around Alessio, under the youth’s arms. He stared at the lowered head, the pain aching in this youth. He had to resist the urge to kiss him, and looked around the room. It would probably be easier to put Alessio over his back, but it would probabl…[Read more]

This.

I love this excerpt, I’ve been writing with these exact same themes for like four years now and it’s rough. But I think this scene has so much impact, I love how real and compassionate it is.

(On a side, ahh Chesterton, one of my favorite G.K. quotes be “Don’t be so open-minded your brains fall out XD”)

Hope that’s acceptable…

I know it might feel like I’m pulling this too far into my world, but I figured Abirami is completely confused as to what’s going on, so he’s going to assume he’s still in his world… hope that’s alright. never done anything like this before. lol.

Oops… didn’t realize should only have one character in at a time… hehe. Let me fix that.

context info

– Dhiaga – title of the evil emperor who killed Abirami’s father and is out to kill him too

– description of the aemirok – in full – About 15 feet tall, distinct wolf-like features and body, but the ears are closer together on top of its…[Read more]

There wasn’t a chance of him making it through a dark, enclosed room ever again.

And he was bordering panic thinking about it, he couldn’t come up with a contingency for it. There wasn’t any controlling the situation or coming up with a plan. He just. couldn’t.

It was all just a haze of pain, numb and breaking into his marrow. It was like bo…[Read more]

reference clues

– loxors are the giants of my world.

– A tannink’esh is my world’s version of a dragon, but slightly different – such as it starts as an aquatic animal, then flies to high altitude volcanos to mate. It has a pair of fins as well as a pair of wings, and it doesn’t create fire, but can hold molten lava in its stomach, which is just…[Read more]

He desires the strength to protect those he loves and his word is his bond. He has a strong work ethic and moral backbone, but he also has a fun-loving side – especially when it comes to his adopted young siblings – where he can be downright silly sometimes.

He recently saved the princess he thought was dead for five years from imprisonment. He…[Read more]

2nd Character

Abirami (ah- bee- ram -ee)

https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aygiff.html

general description in the link.

Man is his father, who was killed five years ago by the emperor, who is also after Abirami. In the picture, father is wearing traditional aygiff garb. Abirami, age 18, is wearing what is called a gaaban, a magically-imbued…[Read more]

why why why why why why why??? I even changed browsers.

arggggg (tearing hair out) sniff sniff (tear)

WHYYYY !!! It didn’t post my second character. …

okay… third try.

https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aelacrin.html

First character is an Aelacrin – named  Ku’Aya (Coo – eye – ah) who prefers the nickname Ku. (link to picture of her)

General description in the link.

She is a feisty 12 year old who was orphaned as a baby and grew up on the streets, so she has a feral survival instinct, but…[Read more]

agg! why won’t it let me post!!!

I forgot to say that she has an artist’s eye, so she’s very observant of the lighting, shading, colors, etc.

ENYDD

Everything was green. So full of life. I leaned back against a tree and watched as the sunlight peeked through the leaves. It was so amazing. So lively. The light made the leaves look like they were glowing. No, not glowing, like…[Read more]

@everyone

I’m going to pull Khalon out for now since he’s currently not going to be doing anything at this point in my WIP, and he’s exhausting to write. xD I will probably drop him back in later though.

My new character is someone who has not appeared yet in my WIP.

Name: Enydd Skovgaard (I’ve recently discovered Welsh names and am very much…[Read more]

Isella

The girl didn’t like Isella. That was obvious enough. She wondered vaguely why, but it was too much work to think, and besides, it hurt.

“My name is May, Delya.”

The words had hardly any meaning, but one word caught her waning attention. My name isn’t Delya. Who is she mistaking me for?

She tried to say, “no, that’s not my name. I’m I…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Pffft, excuse me?? I’ve been in the Lorcan fanclub ever since he and Liorah started squabbling like the two horrible little gremlins they are! XD

Okay fair enough lollll🤣

*Happy gasp* DO ITTTT!!!! I have so many random audios saved because they sound like Liorah and one day I want to actually draw them but I simply do not h…

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@storysmith

Wow, Joshua!

I love this. It does seem to have some real-world parallels, using a very creative fantasy palate.  I have read of some real-world psychopathic scientists that are actively involved in chimeric genetic abominations aimed at “redesigning” the human genome to “enhance humanity” into their psychotic view of the next stage…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

I think I need to clarify that Mejt was jumping to a lot of conclusions XD She has issues with authority and she’s projecting all of it on poor Isella XD Again, I’m sorry, Isella is lovely and probably isn’t thinking anything Mejt is assuming about her. Mejt is just being rude XD

Mejt

The girl opened her eyes. She wasn’t more than a girl, not much older than I was (Is that right, I don’t think you posted her age?)

Her eyes were green and looked wild, troubled. She shifted, slowly, painfully, as though everything hurt. It probably did.

For the first time, I really had the chance to see her. She wore a silver coronet, a…[Read more]