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Cathy replied to the topic Please Critique: Warning- Emotional Scene (1809 words) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
This.
I love this excerpt, I’ve been writing with these exact same themes for like four years now and it’s rough. But I think this scene has so much impact, I love how real and compassionate it is.
(On a side, ahh Chesterton, one of my favorite G.K. quotes be “Don’t be so open-minded your brains fall out XD”)
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