Joelle Stone

@joelle-stone

no real deadline. I’d like to start putting feelers out for traditional publishers this summer… but I have no set date or anything.

@joelle-stone

@denali-Christianson

anybody home?

@joelle-stone

thank you so much. glad you like it! I will hopefully be contacting you soon to ask if you’d like to beta read it for me… =)

They are in a large tent/pavillion that has draped partitions separating the massive tent into different rooms. (they are mobile, just before the final battle)

and, the king is harsh, but it’s not the…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Thanks!

Charging them head on at night is too dangerous. We can’t see well in the daytime, (why not?) let alone night, and we don’t know the terrain.”

I think the reason I had put in was there was a great amount of fog that had descended in the plateau and the lowlands it overlooked, so daytime visibility had been shot.…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

LOL, okay, I’m glad I wasn’t intruding. I can help critique… which’ll probably mean reading through the last few pages of messages. XD I’ll read through them sometime today!

Hi everyone!

Um… mind if I join in the conversation? Sorry if I’m like way too late for that…

I also don’t feel like reading through 27 pages of this, so could somebody update me on what is being talked about now?

Hi, @joelle-stone! *waves* If you think I’m stalking you, then that is not on purpose. XD You just happen to appear everywhere I am.

@joelle-stone

wasn’t sure who else to call out to, but I remembered you did ask to be updated if I posted another section… This one isn’t too emotional, like the last one, but hopefully a bit of fun…

@joelle-stone

Aw, thank you! Will do

I am actually near the end of this novel. Just one more scene, then the final battle. (and any wrap up after it…) so I may be asking for beta readers soon…

@joelle-stone

Thanks so much! I’ve got Chapter 5 finished, so when you get done with chapter 4, I’ll send it over. It’s a real tearjerker!

Sorry, if this is overloading you, but I can’t thank you enough.

@joelle-stone here you go!

Chapter 4

In the morning, a gray fog had settled over the fort and the surrounding terrain, minimizing visibility, and giving the land an eery look. Abner woke early, and patrolled the walls, straining his eyes for any sight of the enemy, but the stubborn fog kept them blind.

Lieutenant North joined him,…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Me and my class are going to  battle a court case (not real) against another class in front of a judge. My role is the Closing Prosecution Attorney. It’s really fun!

@mischievous-thwapling

@wingiby-iggiby

@jasmine

@denali-christianson

@joelle-stone

Sorry I haven’t been on lately! Does anyone have ideas for what’s next?

~Kylie