Jessi Rae

@jessi-rae
Oh, that would make sense if those scenes worked as William’s first plot point as well as Charlotte’s characteristic moment; they show what her normal is. And her uncle’s exposure of William would be her inciting incident, right? It’s definitely William’s 1st plot point like you said… but now I’m wondering where William’s 1st major…[Read more]

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@ashira
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Well, here ya go. This is the first time I’ve put Ignis on paper, well, on a digital document, but you guys get what I mean XD I’ve been meaning to get her written down as she is going to be important in one of my current WIP, but I never got around to it until today/yesterday 😀 She has many quirks and I absolutely love her for them. She per…[Read more]

Okay, I’ve gone through with some edits. I don’t know what you guys think of the changes? Do all the edits! We only have a very little while left before we have to submit…[Read more]

@jessi-rae
Hey, don’t worry about it! I know it can be hard to respond sometimes (especially since I can take awhile…). 🙂
I like your sequencing for the characteristic moment. I have a little trouble with this part of the plot because it almost seems like there’s two characteristic moments: the time frame you described and the events between…[Read more]

Done!

That was really, really, really hard…and you guys will need to tear it up and piece the small bits of goodness together.

So…

CALLING ALL…[Read more]

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@parker
@caleb-e-king
@jessi-rae
@theswordinthebook
@selah-chelyah
@thewirelessblade
@fctait
@professorsjb
@katthewriter
@lightning-spider
@skye
@mairin-atha
@e-b-raulands
@jillifish
@dakota
@brooka3
@scarletimmortalized
@joseph_darkgrate
@NicoleG
@theinconceivable1
@elizabeth
@ellen-blanc
@ashira

*tags everyone for an emergency meeting*

@esther-sears
@parker
@caleb-e-king
@jessi-rae
@theswordinthebook
@selah-chelyah
@thewirelessblade
@fctait
@professorsjb
@katthewriter
@lightning-spider
@skye
@mairin-atha
@jillifish
@dakota
@jane-maree
@brooka3
@joseph_darkgrate
@nicoleg
@theinconceivable1
@elizabeth
@ellen-blanc
@ashira

How do you feel…[Read more]

@jessi-rae It can be a slow process, but that’s okay! It took me ages before my first lot of beta readers, and the book that I have betas go over…is now totally scrapped except two of the characters, which I used in a much better book. 😛

Hang in there, and keep writing!

@esther-sears
@parker
@caleb-e-king
@jessi-rae
@theswordinthebook
@selah-chelyah
@thewirelessblade
@fctait
@professorsjb
@katthewriter
@lightning-spider
@skye
@mairin-atha
@e-b-raulands
@jillifish
@dakota
@brooka3
@scarletimmortalized
@joseph_darkgrate
@NicoleG
@theinconceivable1
@elizabeth
@ellen-blanc
@ashira

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@thewirelessblade
@mairin-atha
@ashira
@jessi-rae
@selah-chelyah
@e-b-raulands

I love everything you guys said! You all had some great thoughts.

Personally, I think the answer varies.

Yes, you should write even if you’re not inspired to, because writing isn’t always easy and it’s not going to happen if you just sit back…[Read more]

@selah-cheylah, @jessi-rae
Well, I think we’ve gotten through the EiLs of all the most important characters, so let’s skip to Week 6’s lesson on story theory and talk about the plot structure! (I’ve copied Jane Maree’s descriptions of the major events in a typical story below for easier reference.)

•The Characteristic Moment

This is where you i…[Read more]

@selah-chelyah
Ah, Charles Kemp! Thank-you! (He’s probably going to come up more in our discussion, so it’s probably good I can call him by his proper character name.) 🙂
I’m not so sure he’s unredeemable so much as he chooses not to be redeemed. Like Jessi noted, he seems to recognize the fact that he’s evil, but instead of being driven towards…[Read more]

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@parker
@caleb-e-king
@jessi-rae
@theswordinthebook
@selah-chelyah
@thewirelessblade
@fctait
@professorsjb
@katthewriter
@lightning-spider
@skye
@mairin-atha
@e-b-raulands
@jillifish
@dakota
@brooka3
@scarletimmortalized
@joseph_darkgrate
@NicoleG
@theinconceivable1
@elizabeth
@ellen-blanc
@ashira

(reminder: please check in for…[Read more]

@theinconceivable1 Ooh, your idea is really cool!!

Hey guys, Im working on designing and drawing the courtyard and its six portals (poetry, fantasy, dystopian/sci-fi, his-fic, mystery, and other) so if you guys have ideas for what you want anything to look like or some inspirational thoughts, please tell me!  Especially if it relates to your…[Read more]

@e-b-raulands: alright, I’ll confess I don’t hang out here a lot but you totally just hyped me up XD This sounds WAY cool and BTW, as the master of the soap box, I applaud your speech! Well done! : D Now, if you don’t mind, I shall henceforth state my thoughts:

Ok so I wanted to start with this thought ““Though Headquarters is based in a sim…[Read more]

@jessi-rae That’s totally okay! I’ve been basically a ghost on here for ages too. 🙈

@esther-sears Wow, that’s great! That’s so cool that it’s your casual writing time and you can just relax and write whatever you want, without having to worry about anything because it’s all for you. 😉

@jillifish That’s so cool! I’d never heard those…[Read more]