JennytheFaun

@jennythefaun

Its fine 🙂 I get it.

If I had to compare myself to any Narnia character, it would have to be Lucy. Lol. I love those books and movies. 😀

@jennythefaun Uh… I don’t remember…

Sorry I got back to you so late. 😛

@kari-karast, @kr-lalonde,@maddiejay,@jennythefaun, @everyone-else

Hello!

Unfortunately, I’ve gotten very little done on this story, so I don’t think we’ll be able to use my work. I didn’t realize that I had 3 days in a row of 12-hour days out of the house. If you have something, that would be excellent. Sorry for not being able to help like…[Read more]

@maddiejay

Um… I can try… if no one else wants to…

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower@kjames0813 @ireneadler
@i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @samberg0
@naomi-sowell @misspenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrac…[Read more]

@kb-writer
Any luck this week?
If not, no worries.

The deadline is midnight tonight if anyone wants to take a crack at it, otherwise it’s no big deal and I’ll just let the judge know we have no submission this time.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
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@r-m-archer @jennythefaun Yes, I have entered it! I edited a story from earlier this year that I wrote for a different contest. Just trying my luck I guess. 😛

I enjoyed both of your stories! (I hope you don’t mind that I read yours Ariel… O.o)

@selah-chelyah and @jennythefaun

Thank you for the suggestions 😀 I admit I haven’t heard of either of those book series before, but I will definitely give them a look!

P.S @jennythefaun I love your name XD

Sounds good to me!
Thoughts everyone else?
We only have till this Sunday if we’re going to write it.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley…[Read more]

@jennythefaun
That all sounds awesome!
Off the top of my head I’m remembering the beginning, and then when she’s talking to Sahran the first time with his siblings. Neither scene is bad, and you’ve got some great details, but there’s also stuff there that doesn’t further the plot or give any necessary information. That could be trimmed a bit.

@jennythefaun

This is really cool! I really liked the cultural vibes in the setting.

It’s a short story, but I liked the characters and feel like I was given enough info to get to know them relatively well for the story.

I loved her horse, and was especially intrigued by the earth verses jewel aspect of living beings. If you wanted to, I t…[Read more]

Excellent job you guys!!
Second place!!!!

Avensbeck: 2,934
Erekdale: 9,481
Knaphollow: 10,183
Meraki: 3,997
New Wessex: 17,592
Parami Alca: 4,891
Rillumen: 6,887

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@kari-karast @i-david
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@the-golden-light @jennyt…[Read more]

@i-david, @jennythefaun, @ericawordsmith, @kari-karast, @mgtask, and @anybody-who’s-#stillin

What if we did something where the three little bears are bumbling ninja-wanna-bees who, due to the deceptions of the Hunter, believe that CR is working with Mr. MacGregor to swindle the poor helpless Mother Goose out of her home. They come up with a plan…[Read more]

Today is the last day to submit your word counts, guys!

The link is in the general forum under announcements. I’m having some trouble with my internet (no data is a real bummer guys) so hopefully you can find it there. If not I’ll try my best to post the link.
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@jennythefaun

Thank you! ^-^

Yay! 😀 I’m super excited to look it over!

@jennythefaun

Hey! I really appreciated your feedback; that was super helpful. (Next time I edit something I need to pay more attention to passive voice and weak verbs, lol.) I’ve made changes, and I was wondering if you’d be willing/have the time to look it over again and make sure I resolved everything sufficiently? If not, I totally get it;…[Read more]