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@jennythefaun

Hey! I really appreciated your feedback; that was super helpful. (Next time I edit something I need to pay more attention to passive voice and weak verbs, lol.) I’ve made changes, and I was wondering if you’d be willing/have the time to look it over again and make sure I resolved everything sufficiently? If not, I totally get it; life is busy, lol.

How is your story going so far?