JennytheFaun

@jennythefaun That sounds good to me.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Coolio. I even have an altered version of Aiden’s story for modern times. 😛

@jennythefaun What do you think?

Time to turn in your word counts guys! I’ve got nothing to contribute, as I’ve been chopping words out, not writing them.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
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@jennythefaun Any suggestions?

@jennythefaun She sounds really cool!

@jennythefaun

I say start over. It’d be easier that way, imo.

Hence why I’m asking. XD They both need development.

@kari-karast @kari-karast @maddiejay @jennythefaun @ireneadler  @samantha-pen @i-david

Hey! Is this thread dead? Cause if so, I’d say it looks fun enough to need resurrecting!!

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @SamBerg0
@Naomi-Sowell @MissPenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-bard @toklaham-veruzia @ryowildfire @sailorj…[Read more]

@kb-writer Great! Looking forward to it.

@jennythefaun No worries! I hope you have fun with it if you decide to participate.

@maddiejay Ikr, how has the time flown by so quickly??? Can’t wait to see what you come up with.

@i-david Hope you take a whack at it! And yes, none normal is a good goal with this challenge.

@jennythefaun
Thank you!

@heather-drabant
Woohoo!! So glad this is back again this month. But also, how is it already October???

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @KenzEnigma @matthewroland Here’s some guild fun if you’d like to join in!

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde
@the-golden-light @jennythefaun
@bekah @samberg0
@naomi-sowell @misspenguin @mckinley @another_chance @fairfay @kori @writingwgrace @chloe @his-bard @toklaham-veruzia @ryowildfire @sailorj @willa

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@jennythefaun

That’s a great idea. Now I just need to figure out which first chapter to share out. 🙂 I may have to combine/edit one or more of them before I do. Thanks for your offer to help.

@jennythefaun
Ooh, I love this world. Very cool story.

1. I wasn’t confused at all. It was mysterious, but not confusing.

2. For the most part I really liked it. The first sentence, however, tripped me up an awful lot. The first and second half just seemed so identically that I had to do a double take. But I thought the rest of the story f…[Read more]

@jennythefaun The predictable part of the story was that the hero didn’t stay dead, which you can’t really change without making this into an entirely different story. But you have a lot more flexibility with the traveler’s character. Focusing on her reactions could make the ending of the story a bit more impactful.

Bread for the…[Read more]

@jennythefaun

Answers to your questions:

1. No. Not in a bad way, at least. I always felt like the things that weren’t immediately clear (like why the stairs are stained with blood) were things you, as an author, had a firm grip on, and I kept reading to see how they would play out.

2. “Her body heaved with lung-scouring breaths” could be cut,…[Read more]

@bree-dawn

Hello! I only have about a minute to type this out… but I want to write at least a little here.

HI! I’m Buddy J. But maybe that goes without saying. I’m a writer, and I too like darkness to a purpose. Now I must go pick my car up from the mechanic. We’re so glad to have you!

Lemme call a few friends over here: @evelyn @kari-karast…[Read more]

@i-david
Thanks!!

All that being said, just because my creative well is sort of dry at the moment, if any of you wonderful knapsack toting adventurers have an idea or thought you’d like to share, don’t hold back. You don’t have to run everything by me, and guildlings are more than welcome to start activities that the guildmaster did not. I wil…[Read more]

@jennythefaun Sounds so cool! I love it!!! And the cover is so inspiring!