Inkhorn

Note: It’s that time of the year when I revise characters—such as changing a name, or changing a physical feature—this is why Nora is back in her brace—and I have another slight change to make. Nora’s eyes are now ice-blue instead of green. This is the last change for Nora. I won’t make any other changes. It also has nothing to do with her bein…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

I am very sorry for your loss. It must be very difficult for you all during this time. Know that my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family🙏

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

My condolences <3

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

I’m so sorry! <3<3 My condolences to you and your family <3

MWUWHAHAHA GREAT JOB KYLIE!

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Lagoron was grooming Radiance when Nora bounded up, limping with her brace and Eowyn on her shoulder. “Lagoron,” she panted, “you need to see this!”

Concerned, Lagoron turned to the one he had mentally dubbed “Maiden of the Golden Heart” or Malhûrwen. “Is something wrong?” he…[Read more]

ACK!! You know what I don’t think they guessed it right at all and that’s why the castle turned out the lights for them to find Grimme who was invisible!! You’re right! I think! Idk anymore I can’t keep up with my own castle!!! 😭

Ahh yeah, I didn’t quite think that one through although I tried to convince the stubborn characters you needed Pa…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world,

I’m so sorry, I’m glad she’s Home though, it’s hard to say goodbye even if they’re going to a better Place 💔💗💗💗

@wingiby-iggiby

@joelle-stone

@mischievous-thwapling

@jasmine

Mine creative juices are flowing again!

(Note: Don’t hate me, but I’m just gonna pretend that Nora never got out of the brace. I feel like I pushed her out of it too fast, and it’s a good plot point, so… yeah. Sorry Nora.)

<b>Nora:</b> *crosses arms* *glares*…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Wow that’s so cool! I love how languages evolve and combine lots of different languages.

Exactly! It began as a common language because there were so many groups that began to communicate! That’s also why the grammar is so simple. It has no declinations, which is honestly a blessing.

That’s awful, I hope something is don…

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@wingiby-iggiby

Yes, the water does contrast (I’m using my contrasting backwards XD) The well is actually shown in the picture prompt, and the water is this rich turquoise, so it stood out. What I could do is to perhaps use the fresh water to lead to thoughts longing for his once beautiful world . . .

That’s a brilliant idea! *Hurriedly looks up…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby of course!  I’m glad I could help 🙂

Thanks so much, y’all!!! I really appreciate it!! I couldn’t exactly put my finger on the issues, but you guys hit the nail on the head! I’ve got a way better understanding of what I’ve gotta do now.

@calidris

I definitely agree with showing more of Isaac’s thoughts.  I think that it would help me to connect with him as a person, and also cou…

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@obrian-of-the-surface-world,

I’m so sorry. *swoops in with chocolate milkshakes* Let me know if there’s anything I can do! (Also I admire your outlook on this – I think a lot of people forget that, for Christians, death means life.)`

@wingiby-iggiby

WINGIBY!! I missed you so much!! *Bowls you over with a massive hug*

OooOh, I love that story! It’s creepy and hopeful at the same time! I love the concept, and Isaac seems like an interesting character!

Okay, here are a few things I’d change. I’m mostly focusing on paragraph-level.

I rested my feet on the pedals and coasted…

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@wingiby-iggiby I would be up for that!

I definitely agree with showing more of Isaac’s thoughts.  I think that it would help me to connect with him as a person, and also could help reveal some background, such as why he’s forced to “doll” people for the carpenter.

One of the things that I noticed was that you have a lot of description, which…[Read more]

Today, my Mom entered Life with no end. Today, she experienced peace everlasting. Today, we said goodbye for now, but we will see you again in a glorified body that is energized with God’s restoration. That leaps in Jesus’s arms and is hugged in everlasting arms with the precious wounds that purchased her glorious entrance into Eternity. Today,…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Frisian is a language in the far north of the Netherlands. It’s not a dialect, though Dutch has a lot of dialects, it’s an entirely different language, and the Frisians consider themselves a separate nationality. They have a flag and an anthem, but economically and governmentally they’re dependant on the Netherlands.

Ohh wow t…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

Guns blazing vs aliens? I don’t know if Hugon will be able to participate in this fight. xD

LOL, Klein and Rosy (Who is elsewhere) are the only characters with guns, so all the others are at the same disadvantage XD

LOL, this is going to be great!

Also, remember that you can change the scenery and monsters at any time! That’s the f…[Read more]

@calidris

I love that idea. 🙂