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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, This Is Magic 7 years, 2 months ago
Thank you so much, dear! I appreciate your support so much! *sends bunches of hugs and sunflowers*
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, This Is Magic 7 years, 2 months ago
Your comments on Moonflower actually prompted me to write this poem. Thanks so much for guiding me toward more imagery!
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, This Is Magic 7 years, 2 months ago
Thank you so much! I’m so glad. 🙂
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, This Is Magic 7 years, 2 months ago
Thank you, dearest!
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, This Is Magic 7 years, 2 months ago
I’m so glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, 3 Steps to Create a Vibrant Villanelle 7 years, 2 months ago
I haven’t tried a villanelle! Now it’s at the top of my lists of forms to try. 😉
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, Resting Heartbeat 7 years, 2 months ago
Beautiful! I especially appreciate the line, “It’s no man’s land that the sun drowns red.”
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Fresh Poems! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@lianajdouglas Oh my goodness, yes! I actually struggle to write fiction, but poetry just…comes! (Not that it isn’t hard though haha)
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Fresh Poems! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@lianajdouglas Beautiful! I especially loved the first verse. 😉 Great rhymes that don’t seem awkward; they fit well and flow smoothly.
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Need Critics for a Free Verse Poem! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@mgtask Thank you for your insight!  🙂 I’ll consider writing another stanza from the POV to round-out!
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, Evangelism 7 years, 3 months ago
I love this poem so much! The emotion is so raw and real and vulnerable. Thank you. 🙂
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Need Critics for a Free Verse Poem! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@kb-writer You have no idea how much this means to me!!! <3
I took your advice to add more images to the last poem I posted (Moonflower), and then it was obvious that my other poems needed a little love too. 😉  I started this poem right after you gave me that tip, so thank you for guiding me in the right direction!
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Emma Starr started the topic Need Critics for a Free Verse Poem! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@cindy @evelyn @sir-leeds @kb-writer @daeus-lamb @libby
Hello! 🙂 I would love criticism/positive comments regarding this poem. This is the fourth draft of this poem, so I’m aware that it’s still a bit green and needs accurate punctuation. The point of my posting this is to see where to take the poem through my next revision.
Here are some…[Read more]
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr)'s profile was updated 7 years, 3 months ago
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Emma Huckabee (Emma Starr) commented on the post, The Light of Shadows 7 years, 5 months ago
“The night was once edged in stars” is my favorite line. So beautiful!! 🙂
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Poem critics…come hither! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sir-leeds Thanks! I hadn’t thought too much about straightforwardness vs subtleness in my poetry. Now I see that it’s much needed. 😀
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Emma Starr replied to the topic Poem critics…come hither! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@kb-writer Thank you so much for your advice!!
When I was writing this, I actually wasn’t thinking of true beauty. I was trying to communicate, in a very general sense, that Christians may appear to be like everyone else, but in times when non-believers cannot thrive, (like difficult trials and dark times) Christians shine their light and still…[Read more]
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Emma Starr started the topic Poem critics…come hither! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
I want to submit this poem to Story Embers. Please tear it apart! Tell me if it’s any good, what to fix, anything! 🙂 @libby @scribbles @sir-leeds  @evelyn @k-a-grey @kb-writer
Moonflower
She is the moonflower.
A mysterious being in the daylight,
With no apparent beauty
But her fluid grace.
Her leaves and tiny tendrils search, pr…[Read more]
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Emma Starr replied to the topic I have a crazy idea… in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@kb-writer I find it interesting that most people started with free-verse, then went on to meter. I actually started with meter/rhyme, then got comfortable with free-verse. (I’ve been free-versing much more lately.) I don’t know which is easier…maybe if you’re an accomplished writer free-verse is??
Side note: I rarely write fiction. I mostly…[Read more]
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Emma Starr replied to the topic SE Submission in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@libby You’re so sweet! <3<3<3 I’m planning to post a poem in the forum this weekend for comments/edits, so it’s going to happen soon! 🙂
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