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Eitan

  • “Revenge? Revenge on…”

    A loud mechanical whine interrupted them.  Nathair moved away from the door without even looking up. Oh wonderful, some regulars apparently – since the bartender knew to set a dozen glasses. Loud laughs like a group already drunk, albeit by adrenaline and eleven men sauntered in.

    Smells like opportunity if you as Nathair.…[Read more]

  • With a look that said, “This is the last straw”, Alessio flopped onto the pillow and blankets he had thrown onto the floor. “I want sleep. Or death. Whichever comes first.”

    He was sitting up, as Hades’ wrist withheld him from laying down. Having nothing better to do, Hades sat down. Honestly, he was tired, but he wanted to keep his attention on…[Read more]

  • “Revenge? Revenge on…”

    Ax-Punk is drowned out by a hideous noise. As I resist the urge to cover my ears, Barkeep sets out a string of glasses. If there was a little less noise, I could have counted them.

    As is, I wait for whoever is heralded by that noise.

    The regulars here – and punk I can promise, you know who is a regular in a locatio…[Read more]

  • Anyway hope this helped!

     

    It did, thank you! 🙂

     

    It’s been so long since I saw you around! How has writing been, how are your characters, what have you been up to!?

    A ton of editing, lol. It’s really great to hear from my story-embers peeps again! How has character castle 2.0 been going?

     

     

  • @jasmine

    *Happy gasp* JASMINE!!!! I MISSED YOU!!!

    It’s been so long since I saw you around! How has writing been, how are your characters, what have you been up to!?

    Okay, to slow down… XD Lemme see, for situations like these I never quite know what to do but I am very partial to exaggeratedly dramatic insults like “I hope a jackal pees on…[Read more]

  • I recently was trying to find exclamations for my character’s dialog and was wondering if any one had any pointers?

    I think good exclamations can add comic relief to a story, but I have no idea how to find any that might work in a fantasy story. “Holly guacamole” doesn’t exactly fit in with the time line

    So if anyone has any ideas (especially…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    Nothing gives me greater pleasure than horrifying people with my alternate use of British and American spellings XD

    Noooooooooo
    One or the otherrrrrrrrr
    aaaaaa >_<
    😆

    Aww, thank you so much! I love his name too! It was one of those cases where the character forms around the name. A writer friend suggested the name and the whole…

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  • @mamaauthoress

    (my Canadian blood cries out in pain at the spelling of the second word in your username every time I type it )

    Nothing gives me greater pleasure than horrifying people with my alternate use of British and American spellings XD

    Also, Frey sounds so absolutely amazing (and I hekkin love his name so much) and I cannot wait to have Eve…

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  • Alessio was done.

    He quietly piled the bed sheets on the floor into a cozy nest and dropped on top of them like a nonverbal ‘kiss-my-sass’.

    “I want sleep. Or death. Whichever comes first.” He mumbled, sardonically waiting for Sir Scary to stop standing where Alessio was forced to sit up for be dragged upright by the handcuf…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy (my Canadian blood cries out in pain at the spelling of the second word in your username every time I type it 😂)

    Also, Laura, LOVE that magic system, it sounds SOOOO cool!!! You’ve really thought it through as well!

    Thank you so much!! <3

    Okay so the plan is: Someone finishes off Lord Castle, we drop in the new characters, a…

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  • Hades was about to attack again, when a white explosion erupted between them. In the chaos, he saw a grin on Arsene’s face, with the fox mask he often wore (he had it on again).

    “Hey now, break it up you three beacons of chaotic energy!”

    …What?

    “There, now that I have you attention,” Arsene continued in a challenging voice, “I would like…[Read more]

  • Frey’s profile!

    Name: Frey Spurling

    Age: About nineteen.

    He’s a Fine Art student at the same school Ophelia and Malcolm go to.

    Appearance: About 5’8″, pretty slight and looks younger than his age. Curly blond hair and blue eyes. Light skin with maybe a few freckles. Probably wearing dark brown slacks and a green sweater.

    Frey has a chronic…[Read more]

  • @irishcelticredflowercrown

    Hiiiii!!!! Welcome back! I am only just returning from self-inflicted exile as well! It’s gonna be fun again to start a new arc!

    @inkhorn @mamaauthoress @lady-grace

    Yayyyy!!! New characters!!!

    Also, Laura, LOVE that magic system, it sounds SOOOO cool!!! You’ve really thought it through as well!

    Okay so the plan is:…[Read more]

  • “If ya say so. I go by Burn.”

    Burn took a sip of the whiskey.

    “Hey, is anyone keeping tabs on Metal-Punk? He’s skulking in a corner like he thinks I can’t hear that non-stop clanking. If we’re gonna do revenge, I bet a hitter would be useful.”

    “Revenge? Revenge on…”

    The loud whine of aircraft engines filled the saloon of the trading p…[Read more]

  • @calidris

    I also think that part of the issue is that main characters tend to be really boring and unlikable.  I think in some cases, people do gravitate towards morally gray or even straight up villainous characters just because they’re dark, but I also think that these characters are just generally really interesting!  I think that there’s kind…

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  • @irishcelticredflowercrown

    EXACTLY!   See, I think it’s good to show that side of humanity – I think a lot of people who turn to evil do have trauma or a lot of hurt in their past, and choosing to follow these desires give them a sense of control over their lives.  It’s interesting to think about how if circumstances had been slightly di…[Read more]

  • @calidris

    I’ll try but she may threaten to shoot me XD why on earth did I give her exceptional archery skills?? *fp* My life is in danger.

    Oohh, interesting! I honestly don’t know what older Yarrow is like but it’d be fun to find out. Mourns the death of the Vulture Vomit ideaXD

    I love the painting of Kit!

     

    @e-n-leonard

    Ooh! Ava would be…

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  • *steps into room with duster*

    (5 hours later after the battle of the dust bunnies has been won)

    *organizes papers and letters and collapses into chair, wondering if anyone will show up*

     

    @mischievous-thwapling

    @wingiby-iggiby

     

    @denali-christianson

    @joelle-stone

     

    @kylie-wingfeather

     

     

     

    Hello everybody

    I was just wandering if…[Read more]

  • “Thanks Snake-Punk but apparently I’m good on your coin.” Was that blind guy laughing at him? He was, wasn’t he? He seemed to scratch the scars under his blindfold when he was nervous. Oh well.

    “Of course. I’m incredibly generous.” Nathair smirked as if he’d totally planned that. He took a sip of his drink and it burned all down his throat – th…[Read more]

  • Before mentally unstable group one could blow each other up, Arsene threw flash powder between them. “Hey now, break it up you three beacons of chaotic energy!”

    White flash powder lit up in the air, catching everyone off guard. When the micro-explosion settled, Arsene grinned at them. “There, now that I have you attention, I would like someone to…[Read more]

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